|Reviews for Burn|
| Stardiouses chapter 1 . 1/29
I really liked it! Awesome fic
| rultas chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Awww...cute, sweet and adorable. The last line was lovely, and Royai stories always have those wonderful characteristics. I always loved your stories, and some of them really make me squeal. Well, awesome job.
| Jessi Tsuki chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Rather sweet. . Well done.
| pinoykengumi7 chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Very nice. A few lines here and there made me laugh. Especially first paragraph.
| lili chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
| Melitza chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
I just have to say, you are one of a handful of authors on here that I absolutely adore. You are a very good writer - your stories have a very sophisticated but easy-to-follow kind of flow; they're enjoyable, and they're engaging.
This was wonderful. An amazing little Royai gem that I adored. My favorite line was "What a lucky gun to get to ride on a hip such as hers all day." Hilarious! And umm yes, the Royai-ness and just a hint of sensualness makes me want to go "SQUEE!". So yes - thank you for another wonderful piece.
| Raz chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
| Vanity-chan chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
last line says it all... perfect ending. nice work.
| Pardison chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
That was totally sweet.
| 11am chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
That was really sweet!
| words without chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Aw! That was great, the last line was just perfect.