|Reviews for The Demons Within Us|
| Marquisha chapter 40 . 10/29
A great story with a great ending. I can't express how happy that I found this story!
| jtscores chapter 40 . 8/14
Thank you, White Dire Wolf. I know that less than ten minutes ago I told you I would properly review your story, but I'm not sorry that I can't. I can't be more proud of the way that it turned out, though. The thing is that this story is so powerful on its own that I feel that whatever I could praise it with would be redundant. This was truly a beautiful thing that you created. You also taught me a lot as well.
Thank you so much. Live, laugh, and love!
| jtscores chapter 39 . 8/14
Fuck me, that was beautiful. I'm sorry but I have no words. I can't properly review this work. I'll save it for after I read the epilogue and have had time to calm down. I'm just really happy that it was happy.
| jtscores chapter 38 . 8/14
I'm really excited now. And still hopeful. Everything seems fine, but knowing this story something sad will happen. I want Kagome to stop crying already! If she doesn't then I might start! :(
I did like how you handled Naraku and Kikyo, though. It was both shocking and original, so props for that. Inuyasha had better come comfort his woman now.
| jtscores chapter 37 . 8/14
I almost cried. Almost! But I didn't. You had me there with that little trick, it was dirty, but I have to give you props, if only because it was so effective. I might die at a young age from a heart attack or something, but at the moment I just want closure from this story. I have said this before and I may say it again, but this is undoubtedly one of the best fanfictions that I have ever read. I look forward to discovering it's ending in perhaps an hour or two(I'm a really slow reader). My chest is doing flip-flops, and not the good kind. But also the good kind, because your story methods are effective. I'm terrified and hopeful.
Happy ending, here I come?
| jtscores chapter 35 . 8/14
I started reading this about three days ago, I think.
This character of Miroku said to wish for things that are impossible. I'm going to wish for a happy ending. I'm not even sure if this is a completed fanfiction, but the first part of the first chapter gives me an unpleasant sinking feeling in the pit of my gut. I usually don't mind how a story ends, so long as it makes sense. I can't seem to feel like that for this story, though. I want the absolute best for these characters after the shit that they persevered through. Whether they (and I) receive a happy a ending at the end or not, I applaud you, WDW, for your skills in writing and character building. You have made me care about characters probably more than any other author has, and that's saying something!
Whether it waits for me or not, I can only dream that this is a happy ending.
| xXx Tinkies xXx chapter 40 . 11/15/2016
Fantastic story! Very well written! Keep up the fabulous work! Have a great week and take care! :)
| Guest chapter 40 . 7/30/2016
I am so very sad that this story is over. It was beautifully and painfully realistic in the best ways. One of the only fan fictions to really touch me in such a way that it'll leave a lasting impression with me always. Good job.
| MissKitty35 chapter 40 . 12/6/2015
Wow. Just wow. Thank you so much for sharing this story. Best wishes to you and your family. Thank you.
| Guest chapter 40 . 1/17/2015
I don't have words to describe ur story
I can just say that it was incredibly amazing the feelings the emotions everything u wrote it made me feel them and...wat else...
Amazing...The way you wrote awesome brilliant it made me cry and laugh and I...thank u for that
may God bless u and ur family
and thanku for sharing and completing the story...
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/27/2014
Oh my god let me just say this is the first pice of literature, a published book or fanfiction that has ever given me shivers. I actually decided against doing my essay and failing the class in favor of continuing to read this
| LadyTraceD chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
It's crazy, it has been so many years since I read this. I can never forget it! The way you write has always been amazing. I always hope the best for your family, yourself and your future writings!
Now to re-read everything!
*former 'Ro0tin4kagome' lol
| Mars Butterfly chapter 40 . 6/12/2014
Read this fanfic for the second time and fell in love once again. I was going through my list of favorited stories and came across this one; once I started reading, I couldn't stop! Definitely was worth reading when I first came across it and definitely worth reading now. Thank you for this.
| xoxoSoCal619Sweetheartxoxo chapter 40 . 2/5/2014
That was an awsome story
| kiki-chan3410 chapter 40 . 1/12/2014
This story is very beautiful! And has very wonderful inspirational advice in here that sometimes had me thinking awhile about myself. It had all the drama and romance in there that was just right! And I absolutely loved it! I hope to read more of your wonderful stories in the later future!