Reviews for A Koumi fairytale
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
I love the story but you need to fix your quotations
For example:
"Well." Mimi asked. "How did it go?"
But wonderful story though.
miiko chan chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
kawai! koumi is my favorite couple. thank you for write it
NegaiKoumi chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
The Good ol Dayz! I wish ppl support Koumi still but this place is Dead with no Koumi fics.. There are fics that have Koumi but only as Side-Couples bummer.. Koumi Out Kuz Our Fan-base Is Still Around...
myshadowspirit chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
Interesting . . . I wouldn't worry to much about the grammer. I could still read it. If you want you could try useing the Grammatik too if you have one. Course, that can get annoying . . . Especially when my characters are swareing. The Grammatik says it's wrong and choose a better word and that ticks me off, but it does help me catch things I never would have seen with out it.
LouiseSyes chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
it's really good. the only thing to work on is speech paragraphs with quotation and punctuation.
digigirl02 chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
Thanks for all who read/reviewed my story.
KalesJ chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
Aw, this is really good! :D