|Reviews for At The Heart Of The Matter|
| Nigel943 chapter 12 . 6/15
Now it's just gotten downright ridiculous...
Harry goes from being controlled and meek to wealthy(granted he already was) playboy powerful politically and legally over freaking night...
Agn...your English and grammar really really needs work...
| Nigel943 chapter 2 . 6/15
I often wonder why is it that when fic writers state the monetary assets of Potter why don't they simply do the conversion of Knut's to sickles and sickles to galleons...
Srsly... yeah I expect there to be Knuts and sick but really..100k galleons is fine but why 10k sickles and 50k Knuts or is it because you don't know or can't be bothered to do the conversion...
This fic is rather interesting but I really you need to sort out your English...
To many grammatical errors and it's killing the actual story...
It's really bothersome to read that way...
| tammgrogan chapter 35 . 5/30
You should have killed Ginny, not Luna. I really the this story until now. Now I'm just sad. I think I'll just go to sleep now. Not sure if I'll even finish reading it.
| rowenasheir chapter 1 . 5/12
Screwe, Goode and Hart are a real legal firm as is Rush, Rush and Delay; Lies and Bullis; Shaidy Butt Solisiters; Payne & Fear (your worst nightmare;Low, Ball & Lynche;
| calzy chapter 1 . 4/15
all of it is absolutely amazing
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/5
| Guest chapter 24 . 1/21
This is a pretty good story for anyone looking. The only things I'd warn potential readers about are the extreme over use of exclamation points (for those like me who mentally put emphasis on the words it makes the sentence sound corny) and the characters speech patterns (the way they talk is no t how anyone would speak in real life. Slightly immature and odd if anyone were actually saying it out loud.) Other then those points it's a decent story line! 6/10 from me.
| Kai chapter 10 . 10/1/2017
Are homophones really that difficult? English is a foreign language for me, but even I can spot quite a lot of spelling errors of that kind, and there are again a couple in this chapter.
"Heels" and "heals" have different meaning, as have "here" and "hear". To get "your" and "you're" wrong is sadly quite common, btw "quite" and "quiet" aren't the same as well, as are "hail" and "hale". I'm just waiting for the usually greatest stumbling block "their", "there" and "they're".
| Guest chapter 32 . 9/29/2017
God I can't read this crap anymore I made it to ch:32 but come on you have no idea what you are talking about her reaction to what happened is just over-the-top way blown out of proportion
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/10/2017
Just one query: is English not your first language; or probably that of your parents though you may treat it so?
| TheFlowerOfTheCourt chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
If you're going to correct someone for their grammar, at least make sure your post isn't full of grammatical errors of its own...
| Lord Barinthus chapter 2 . 2/13/2017
The premise is interesting, but the poor grammar is giving me a headache.
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 1/21/2017
Awesome chapter and plot and amazing idea
| Bronze chapter 7 . 1/18/2017
Why is it a surprise when people find out that ol' Dumb-As-A-Door is a lying thief? If you rally believe that he funds the Order of the Burnt Squab out of his own accounts, I've got a tower in Paris, a few bridges in various states and some bottom land down south to sell you. He's always spouting out " It's for the greater good Harry. "after all. I'm sure the Goblins are missing a few thing that don't concern money. Like family books and anything else he can steal, oh sorry, I meant to say borrow. Very informative chapter here. It starts to show just how untrustworthy the headmaster is. Most of the Order isn't looking a whole lot more honest either frankly. Or maybe it's just they never knew where the money he paid them came from. So Harry's going to have to be very careful who he deals with among them.
| rootietootie16 chapter 1 . 1/11/2017
Don't worry what people say for you will never make everyone who reads your story happy. As long as you like your story, keep writing and posting. For everyone has there own opinion so just pay attention to if you like your story. I am excited to read more of your stores in the future.