Reviews for Coach Trip
Onision chapter 1 . 10/4/2016
Omg I'm dying. I also just listened to crawling last night and now it's stuck in my head cx
Yuyne chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Sasuke? You're emo.
HavenCraze chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Heh that must've been one heck of a day... And Naruto didn't get to even ride the rides he wanted... Oh well he got Sasuke in the end so i guess it evens out hehehe
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
That was awesome and hilarious and cute, I loved it and excellent job

Thanks for the idea
DaLostPenguin chapter 1 . 7/18/2011

i loved this part

' "Kakashi-sensei, are we gonna die?" he said, his bottom lip trembling.

"Yes. I'm sorry."

The child began to cry, as Iruka turned around and yelled, "KAKASHI!"

"I'm sorry. I thought he had a right to know." '

i laughed soooo hard

i love sasunaru its so cute

but serious da teaa cups? lol _
KeepsakeKey chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
""Wait… what?" Naruto yelled, his eyes growing wide. "You want to ride me?"

"Yes," Sasuke said, sarcastically, rolling his eyes.

"What… wait… right here?""


I was laughing so hard. x'D

Annnnd, that's the last of your NaruSasuNaru stories!

They were all wonderful! o3o
Animeyaoimaster chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
OpiumPoppy chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Lol, I love Sasuke's playlist/Itachi's music taste, immediantely stuck Linkin Park on when I read the first line :)

Also, whoop! Go teacup ride!
Artificial Starlight chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
I laughed a lot. Such a simple and short story but there was definitely humor. Kakashi's antics kept me laughing throughout the entire story (Are we going to die? - Yes, I'm sorry)... Yeah, you're a genius.

Sasuke loving the children rides... hilarious. I'm sad that Naruto's day wasn't too fun though (despite finding his love for Sasuke, the Disneyland park was a bust). Things got happy in the end though. :)

All in all, I loved reading this. Thanks!
mirit chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
really cute! i loved it!
MrsRuebeusHagridDursley chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
That must be the funniest Author's note I have ever read.

I can just imagine...
OvenBased chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Haha that was insane, but a bit too cliche at parts for my liking. I swear to god, at least 2/3 of all fanfics involve one male landing on top of the other for some reason or other, and both liking it xD It /always/ happens xD

It was good anyway xD
DieForSasuke chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
That was awesome and hilarious. The perfect way to end ther day after doing a 5 report paper on the skeletal system. Loved it! Keep writing!
Hana M chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
This story is cute. I like it.
narusasu kit chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
i really like it! its perfect i wish there was more

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