|Reviews for Waking up alone|
| sallig87 chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
the problem with some poems is that the words themselves don't exactly relate to kotor. if you spoke of specific moments of their past, distinct physical traits or anything surrounding the star wars world well it would have made it obvious you were talking about Carth and Revan, and not a random poem that you changed certain words to make it fit more! if you didn't say it was about Carth and Revan, it would have been hard to figure it out (every one knows about Revan leaving Carth)! anyway...don't think it's a flame!