Reviews for 3rd Time's a Charm
Happygolucky103 chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
I love this story.
YoullNeverKnowMe chapter 30 . 4/19/2008
WOW what an amazing story! I have sat in front of my computer a whole day reading it. I couldn't stop myself. A truly amazing story!
shortee962 chapter 30 . 11/21/2007
Finally an update! I love it!
Vera Roberts chapter 29 . 9/2/2007
Awe, what a sweet and hot chapter! Kim, this was absolutely perfect, honey! Just perfect!

And Big Daddy could knock my ass up anytime he wants! Hell, he needs a son!
Princess Mel chapter 29 . 9/2/2007
Wow this was a really intense chapter. I liked it though
Wolflihood chapter 29 . 8/26/2007
This fic is absolutely amazing. it makes me wish I was Leila. Can't wait til u continue!

wrestlenascargirl chapter 28 . 7/27/2007
great story. was that the end or will there be more?

ShadowPassion chapter 28 . 6/14/2007
easily one of the best batista fanfics i've ever read...absolutely wonderful...if only i could create something like up the great work...
TheRealKellyAnne chapter 28 . 1/31/2007
So beautifully written as always!
Vera Roberts chapter 28 . 1/19/2007
Ya know, Kim...

A disclaimer would've helped...

Now I'm sitting at my desk, just finished my Mcnuggets and I'm downing my Hi-C orange because someone forgot to put the 'strong sexual content' warning at the beginning of the chapter.


So maybe I'm a sappy bitch...

This chapter is by far one of my favorites in this story, if not the favorite. It details their relationship in just one beautiful and sweet chapter. Their love is explosive, passionate, consuming, and intimate. Their lovemaking is a mind-blowing, body-numbing experience.

They had a beautiful struggle. They were more than determined to make it work for themselves, for the families, for each other...the way Leila holds onto Dave tells me that he is her protector, her strength, her hero. And the way Dave protects her lets me know she is his world and nothing will come between them.

*sigh* Beautiful work.
Vera Roberts chapter 27 . 12/28/2006
This chapter, I believe, is your best written work to date.

Now maybe I'm being bias; I haven't read your other story (which Rae is a huge fan of), but I think this chapter right here, could not have been more properly executed.

When the McMahons were giving gifts to Leila, I almost starting choking up myself. I could feel the lump of coal in my throat as she tearfully accepted not just the gifts, but the sheer and unconditional love and support she has received from them throughout her life. The blanket was touching; a memory that while she can't forget her past, Leila remembers who was there for her when she needed the most support.

Vince and Linda taking care of Leila, Dave, and Xander was equally touching. It shows that Vince trusts Dave and knows that Dave will do whatever he can to protect her and his son.

Finally, the butterflies that Dave was feeling. Yeah, he's been the collected soul but now he's scared shitless. It's not cold feet, but the feeling of he wants the day to be over with so he can finally enjoy his life with his new wife and newborn. Beautiful.

Great chapter!
Vera Roberts chapter 26 . 12/23/2006

Um...hmm...I don't even drink and I think I'm going to start.

I have a lot of shot glasses, too.

Now I'm sure you want a pertinent review, right?

I think this is one of your best and descriptive narratives to date. Not necessary about the sexual actions but the way the party was described. I could picture seeing Dave, Leila, and their guests just letting loose and being wild. They're uninhibited, happy, and just free. The sensual music filling the air and love is definitely encompassing the room. That's one orgy I would love to be a part of.

Great chapter!
TheRealKellyAnne chapter 27 . 12/9/2006
So well written, so beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing :)
Princess Mel chapter 27 . 12/8/2006
i like this chapter a lot and its good to see a soft side of vince, the dress was nice but i liked the one to its left better
TheRealKellyAnne chapter 26 . 12/3/2006
Interesting chapter! Cannot wait to read about the wedding :)
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