|Reviews for The Human Factor|
| Guest chapter 50 . 1/27
Is this the end of the story? It seems like it's not finished. I'm wondering if I missed something.
| guest chapter 47 . 1/17
OK. This has been an interesting story and I did not think it would be in the beginning. But it is now time to close it as it has jumped the shark. Ziva Gibbs? Leonard Kirk? 50 chapters. Time to wrap it up and close this one out. If need be, you could always do The Continuing Adventures of...
| Tlyna52 chapter 49 . 8/20/2016
Have you quit writing? I had been saving this story and 2230 for years now but it seems as if you have abandoned both which is truly sad as they are very well written and quite fascinating stories. You had put so much work into them that it is sad to see that you left them unfinished.
| Marvelmyra chapter 50 . 5/26/2016
4 YEARS without an update ?/?
| Kaneswolf chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
I have decided after getting this far that I am either a glutton for punishment or I am so starved for the magic of your writing that I will settle for whatever I can get. I have read as much as you have of forged in fire, 2230 and this story and painfully crave more. I may not get more but I pray that you rescue these orphans and breathe more life into them. Your portrayals of these characters are enchanting and intense. Please if at all possible continue these stories even if it is in the future.
| Sarai chapter 50 . 2/23/2016
Glad you updated.
| Crow chapter 50 . 7/20/2015
I really love this story and come back regularly to re read it. I hope you go back to working on it. I would love to see more!
| finabin chapter 36 . 6/11/2015
I'm rereading this story as it is EXECELLENT! I reallly love this chapter! It makes me laugh. Please please can you tell me if you've added any further chapters. If I remember Ezra really needs some assisstance at the enD. Thank you very much for the much needed laughter.
| Marvelmyra chapter 50 . 1/12/2015
More ! I expect this could use 50 more chapters.!
| kess55 chapter 50 . 1/7/2015
You should be writing novels...this is an amazing story that I hope one day you will finish..
| Guest chapter 50 . 1/5/2015
Loving this story hope this isn't the end...
| nanateacher99 chapter 50 . 11/23/2014
This was a delight to read. I am a big fan of Susan Foster's GDP universe and you've incorporated her concept beautifully. Well written! Didn't want to stop reading. So many unanswered questions. Now, I have to watch the series. Thank you for sharing your story.
| ryainelf chapter 50 . 10/21/2014
I really enjoy this story. I've read it 4 or 5 times. I hope you are able to write more on it. I'd really like to see where you go with it. What is the secret Vin has? How was Ezra 'broken'? Was JD's dad really a Centurion? How does the training in Quantico go? Does Hatti find the boys some 'women'? I have to admit Dr. Lenard Kirk, definatly made me think of Bones McCoy from Star Trek. :)
| maj chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
Human Factor & 2330 . . .
Have been waiting a long time for MORE to these stories.. They are so good! I love the concept and have re-read what you've posted many times, just coming to a halt with the last chapter..
PLEASE give us more and finish them.. they are way to good to just leave as is..
| gonegreatgranny chapter 50 . 6/14/2014
wonderful story but it needs to be finished...PLEASE!