|Reviews for Imprisonment|
| Anonym chapter 1 . 3/15
Hi, I just read your one-shot and it's really really good. It's very interesting for me as I was asking myself what this man might actually really think about his second wife, as he is so unpredictable. I was confused, that he was charming her in Monte Carlo, but in MAnderly he seemed so cold. I think you do reflect him very good. Your text from his POV is very reasonable and you helped me to understand this character a bit better. Thanks for that!
and I really enjoyed your kind of writing! Keep that style :)
Have a good time! (I'm not a native speaker, so I hope this wasn't rather confusing :D)
| macawtopia chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Aw, I loved it! Maxim always seems so pensive in the book, and it's interesting to see your interpretation of some of his thoughts ]
| Anon chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
How ironic! because, of course 'rebecca' makes an apperance at the ball. I like your representation of maxim-i never really could tell if he truly loved her or not. nice job :)
| Dan Sickles chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Splendid! You captured the atmosphere of the story perfectly, everything Max fears and everything that keeps him shut away from the innocent young wife he adores. Bravo!
| Mrs. James Norrington chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
"Rebecca was not coming back..."
If only you knew, Maxim. lol. :D
Nicely done- it's a great descrition of both him and his realtionships with Rebecca and the narrator.
| Permanent Rose chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Very well written. You've captured Maxim's character quite well.
| mokenju chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
It's an interesting insight in the thoughts of Max. He is truly in character. The only bad thing I have found in that one-shot is that is precisely a one-shot. I would have love to see this continued.
| Angel sumoritos chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Very good, I like it!
| Becki Black chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
i thought it was great well done! there should be more stories of rebecca
| Dylan Shelby chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Incredible! What a marvelous job you did! Rebecca has always been one of my favorite books, and I think your Maxim POV was dead on.
| kris932 chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
Very good. Not much to say here. But your one-shot was well written and (to me anyway)sounded like what Maxim would think.
| greensapphire chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
WOW that was great, it was like you were Maxim weird but in a good way, great job I enjoyed reading the book but never saw the movie (someday), anyways great job maybe you should do Rebecca or Winter(2nd) :)
| oldsoul01 chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
Wow, this was amazing! I loved it, very well written.
And it's very nice to know what Maxim is thinking for once.
Very Well done!
| camerabugs chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
You have written a wonderful story. I think that you have captured the perfect writing style for Rebecca. Please, continue to write.
| Princess Pat chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Beautiful, that was truly beautiful. I only wish it were longer. You've got all the characters completely nailed down, and you have a very good understanding - in fact, I'd say this helps me understand Maxim even better. I hope you write more.