Reviews for Probationary Member
HyperdermicHypnotist chapter 1 . 21h
Holy hell that took a turn.
NA chapter 1 . 2/17
I can't say it it isn't effective as a tragedy, but I feel like, for what this story set out to do, it would've been better if Kelly had lived to the end.
Shadowpawzzz chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
Such a good story a few places I got lost but overall very well done
Nerfhearder69 chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
There was a comic out of Dark Horse that had a prostitute turn hero. You did a better job of it. I laughed until I cried, then just cried. A very good fic. Thank you.
Mandabar chapter 1 . 7/28/2016
Wow... This was a moving story. I'm sad she died, but she died a hero. Didn't give the fuckers anything.

Kudos!
Shareon chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
This was a very well written plot and story with an engaging main character and numerous supporting characters well-suited to their canon portrayals.

It can be a bit politically opinionated at times, but seeing how that is one of the main plot points of the story, it's hard to see how the same premise would work without the forceful opinions.

If I were to be brutally honest the main character is a Mary Sue, and the ending is a bit cliche. However the execution, with in-universe characters actually disliking her and her facing genuine hardship, does a great deal to mitigate that.

There was obvious tension between the puritanical Justice League (which in general was true to life with how they are portrayed in canon) and the professional of the new character. There were several points of unexpected and well executed comedy, and the drama was equally powerful. The inner thinking of Superman at the end was especially poignent.
Fourtoes chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
That got pretty depressing for what I initially thought was a crack fic.
Smiling Seshat chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
I really like this. I thought I was going to dislike it at first, but the fic surprised me and really had me crying at the end.
dayum chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
I usually loathe OC stories, but this one is the exception. The idea of a pornstar joining JLA was hilariius to me at first, and I thought it was just for the laughs, but then you introduced the conflicts centred around Kelly's career, and the story became truly intriguing.

Really great idea. i was hoping for a sequel, where she came back from the grave. Cheesy, but I really felt that there are so much potential left unexplored within the 16k words.
pikachucat chapter 1 . 3/10/2016
cool
BlackDove WhiteDove chapter 1 . 3/6/2016
Ahhhhhhhhhh! I am unber sad right now. Just, the feels...
ShaiGar chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Shit that was good. Hell, that could easily be DC, if DC stepped their game up.
The Mightier Pen chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
This is very good but it is so tragic. :(
Afalstein chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
An excellent story! I'll admit, I wasn't quite sure where you were going, and for a while I was worried it was going into overpowered OC area, but you created a believable and interesting character that interacted with all the others well.

Flash had an excellent point-the League definitely employs some shady characters (although it's worth pointing out few of them CONTINUE with their practices after being hired) And considered some of the costumes-certainly in the Teen Titans-certain superheroines might as well be porn stars.

I also liked how you kept the core JL team consistent and true to their comic characters. Again, I was worried that she was going to seduce Superman, or that Batman or Wonder Woman would be outed as a pervert. But all the characters stayed true to themselves, and Kelly's death and their reactions to it were all magnificent (Bats' cameo as Matches was also great). Good story all around!
majorshane chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
Wow. Your parody humor stories are good but when you write a serrious piece your talent really shines through. I am super impressed. Danni felt like such a well developed character that if I didn't know better I would have sworn she was not an OC at all. Bravo!
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