Reviews for Probationary Member
bell chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Rayner. Not Rainer. Rayner.
PcFredson chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
A simple, quiet, but very Heartfelt Wow.
A :)
Jigoku no Yami chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
this was funny. Up until the end. A promising new hero, who in the end gets whacked. Thats just wrong man.
Hinatafanboy chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
How sad.
Stewart M chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Clear, vivid characterization. Quick pace.
Ikurus chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
I wish the last part of the story was different. I prefer happy endings and a lack of death by torture.
Thank you for wring and sharing this.
Devil Reader chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Interesting how they discriminated against her at first to becoming practically her best friends I bet if they get another porn star as a member of the justice league, they'd treat her better. I liked this story.
ShadowCub chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
If you were going for creepy disturbing piece of work you did it.
Beloved Daughter chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
...Wow. Totally wasn't expecting this story when I read the summary. I love what you did with the story though. It was really well written and not predictable at all, which made it awesome.

Thanks for writing and posting!
Whispering Darkness chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
I liked the characterization of everyone, the development in relationship (such as between Kelly and Diana) and the realness of this story. I'm more into happy endings, but once again, it made this story far more real to have it end like this. The change from humorous at the start to well... the end was a bit offputing for someone like me (who likes her happy endings ;) ) but not it happened gradually enough, with hints of serious issues before, to not be too jarring.

Thank you for the story,
Alasoi chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Huh. Very interesting thought. Nice work.
Meteoricshipyards chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
That was very good. Very sad.

Interesting that she knew all that information and the League will never know that she could have blown a bunch of their covers. She proved her hero status there.

Thanks for the story.

Tom A.
Zankaru Zelladonii chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
I love/hate this story. Every few months I look through my favs and find this, start reading it, get excited over her training, then at the last chapter finally remember how it ends, but I cant stop reading.
M2J MandalorianJedi chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Poor Kelly. And I was seriously hoping she'd get a team of her own.

This was far different from some of the other things I've seen you write. And what happened to her was most definitely a big suprise. Still, the Justice League as a whole learned to not judge somebody based on outward appearances.
Marcus Rowland chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
I thought I'd reviewed this ages ago, but I just re-read it and realised I haven't.

I think it's one of your best stories, and one of the best I've read with a DC universe setting. While I've liked most of your stories for this setting, the greater length has given you the space to work on characterization, and it shows.

Added to my favourites.
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