Reviews for Probationary Member
Alasoi chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Huh. Very interesting thought. Nice work.
Meteoricshipyards chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
That was very good. Very sad.

Interesting that she knew all that information and the League will never know that she could have blown a bunch of their covers. She proved her hero status there.

Thanks for the story.

Tom A.
Zankaru Zelladonii chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
I love/hate this story. Every few months I look through my favs and find this, start reading it, get excited over her training, then at the last chapter finally remember how it ends, but I cant stop reading.
M2J MandalorianJedi chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Poor Kelly. And I was seriously hoping she'd get a team of her own.

This was far different from some of the other things I've seen you write. And what happened to her was most definitely a big suprise. Still, the Justice League as a whole learned to not judge somebody based on outward appearances.
Marcus Rowland chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
I thought I'd reviewed this ages ago, but I just re-read it and realised I haven't.

I think it's one of your best stories, and one of the best I've read with a DC universe setting. While I've liked most of your stories for this setting, the greater length has given you the space to work on characterization, and it shows.

Added to my favourites.
Thimble chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
You made me cry, damn you.
Yusuke Urameshi - Mazoku chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Im pissed that u killed her but that rocked!
Morhek chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
Oh...oh god. I don't think a fanfic has ever come this close to moving me to tears. I never thought a story about a porn star superhero could be so great. Kudos to you for taking a strange concept and doing something fantastic with it! And now I want to read a Kinesis comic! :'(
Xelab chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Amazing story.

I too thought this was a great crack fic at first and there was many scenes that made me lol.

However, by the end, I was almost in tears.

Bravo sir, Bravo.
prudiisten chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
This is really good. I mean it has a great plot and everything.
cyberfrogX chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Very well done.
Karakot chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
i like it. i like the charter and i like how storng u made her. she wasnt a mary-sue bt she was really cool. and she didnt break which was the coolest. very well done.

Quincy80 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
I read past the first bit because the concept was funny, but it was the depth of the story and the finish that earned it a spot on my favourites.
Morality0duality chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
That was sad and happy and good and put a surprising amount of characterization in an OC to make lovable without making MS. Are you thinking aobut retconning her death to make a series on her or resurrecting her.
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Dear Adrian:

As usual, you've managed to do the DCU more justice than some unkind persons would say it deserves. (Not that I'm naming names, of course.) I think I ought to point out, however, that "Kinesis" is Greek, not Latin. The Latin for "motion" is - well, "motio".


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