Reviews for Probationary Member
Morhek chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
Oh...oh god. I don't think a fanfic has ever come this close to moving me to tears. I never thought a story about a porn star superhero could be so great. Kudos to you for taking a strange concept and doing something fantastic with it! And now I want to read a Kinesis comic! :'(
Xelab chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Amazing story.

I too thought this was a great crack fic at first and there was many scenes that made me lol.

However, by the end, I was almost in tears.

Bravo sir, Bravo.
prudiisten chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
This is really good. I mean it has a great plot and everything.
cyberfrogX chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Very well done.
Karakot chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
i like it. i like the charter and i like how storng u made her. she wasnt a mary-sue bt she was really cool. and she didnt break which was the coolest. very well done.

Quincy80 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
I read past the first bit because the concept was funny, but it was the depth of the story and the finish that earned it a spot on my favourites.
Morality0duality chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
That was sad and happy and good and put a surprising amount of characterization in an OC to make lovable without making MS. Are you thinking aobut retconning her death to make a series on her or resurrecting her.
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Dear Adrian:

As usual, you've managed to do the DCU more justice than some unkind persons would say it deserves. (Not that I'm naming names, of course.) I think I ought to point out, however, that "Kinesis" is Greek, not Latin. The Latin for "motion" is - well, "motio".


n'Faele chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Excellent. I didn't expect it be much when I started, but by the end - by the end I felt a bit sad. Once again, truly an excellent fic.
Insane Romantic chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
OMG that was really sad. xD I wasn't expecting the ending at all! At first I thought it was going to be some parody type thing, and then the ending happened. Anyways, I loved this! :)
1WiththeButterfly chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
This is probably one of the best pieces of thought-provoking writing I've ever found on this sight. Not only is it incredibly well written, and very entertaining, it brings a focus onto the characters in such a way that has you sitting back from your computer staring up at the heavens and thinking.

Truly magnificent.

The comedic segments really put a smile on my face as I read them, the ideas of batman being so stumped by something so simple, superman watching porn and wonder woman using would be contracts to get her to go show her boobs as a pick me up too good to believe.

And then there was kelly. poor kelly, who was a character unlike any other. I found her thought processes as she was being slowly tortued to death to be some of the most heart wrenching moments in my recent memory. It goes to show just how good your characters are when you can make your reader feel great sadness upon their deaths.

That she was able to not give anything, regardless of the tremendous pain she was under, said something about people. its not what someone does that defines them, but who they are.

I found the ending to be very bittersweet, and that was a perfect way of closing this. Superman works as the tragic figure who cant deal with the idea that he cant save everyone. its why he's written like that. Doug's comment that superheroes come back showed hope, and batman's comment that not all do just as much futility.

Wonder Woman and Batman going to watch kelly act as a stripper in whatever the film was about seems like a nice way of leaving it for me. simple. down to earth.

Because even superheroes cant stay that way all the time.

Thank you for writing such a terrific story
inq101 chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
I didn't expect that ending. Good work.
Paulthored chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
... ... ...



just wow.


I sometime's get flack for enjoying reading these storie's so much.

...this is Why.

umino-gaara chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
This was really good. Kelly was an interesting character. I was deeply saddened by her death. I'm also glad that you didn't go into detail about the torture she experienced.
Dormant Account 24 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
I don't read much DC stuff, but this was recommended and I'm glad I did. What could have been a crack fic turned out to be a very good story. Thank you for sharing.
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