|Reviews for Probationary Member|
| sun tzu1 chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
Awesome story. The tragic endin took me by surprise...But, awesome story.
| Mad Dog Milne chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
A wonderful story. Pity she had to die in the end but a message was shown. As the old saying goes "you can't judge a book by its cover". I look forward to more stories and hopefully if you do more Justice League or DC characters in the future, you'll include Lobo.
| Metropolis-Rising chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Wow, that was really rough. You created a totally plausible, amazing, real character and had her interact with some amazing versions of the leauge and then it's all snatched away. Emotionally and stirring, really great. Has anybody ever drawn a picture of her? It'd be great to actually see her in a comic art style drawing but the images you created here are also really great.
| Andrew Joshua Talon chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
A little peek into the possibilities of the DC verse. You do these well. Tragic, provocative, and inspiring in a way. Good work.
| incandescens chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
That is a beautiful piece of work. I'm at a loss for words. Thank you.
| red.junko chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
This was great! Wonderfully written! Was a blast to read!
| GoldenRat chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
Kelly was a terrific OC and the fic was really good. This fic is going to linger. Sometimes stories don't have happy endings. It's so sad.
| Natasel chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
This could have simply been a simple comedy but you have pressed on and made it into a great story about a great human being.
Kinesis will be remembered abd Kelly shall be mourned.
May her courage, kindness and humanity be an enduring example.
| DaBear chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
This piece ran the gamut of emotion. Started out as a hilarious proof on why you should check a little bit about the background before allowing anyone into your superhero group, and wound up with me leaking tears as I realized what exactly was happening to the poor girl.
This was a great story and is going immediately on my Favorites.
| AnimeFan101 chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
I have to admit that I just about killed myself laughing when it was revealed what she did for a living.
But I nearly cried at the end. And for a guy like me, it's rare that I find something sufficient to move me to tears.
You have a great story here, and I would have loved to read more of Kinesis. So I'm gonna do the only thing I really can - add it to my favs list so I can always remember this story of a great woman.
| Nemi chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
My First Signed Review in quiet a while. ANd for Good Reason. I'm going to have to insist that you take down this story. It is impropper for it to be posted on the internet on such a site as Fan Fiction dot Net when you should have submitted it to DC Comics instead. And if they don't jump all over you to publish it as an Elseworld or an actual part of JLA canon then they are complete idiots.
| Icha chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
Sweet, Adrian. Very different from your usual take, but still have that Tullbergian sense of humour. Sad to have Kelly leave us, but the chance to resurrect her is not an option here, no?
Oh, I have to say that I liked it that Diana was one of the first heroes who really befriended Kelly and accepted her as she was. And Bats’ reactions were appropriate.
| Spirit of Vengeance chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Oh. my. freakin. god. Best. fanfic. ever.
| UnbelieverDrizzt chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
it touched me in a way only john irving works ever have... this piece of writing leaves you sad and not crying, somewhere between despair and hope... in the eye of the storm where the only stability lies...
| batfan7 chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
Wow, creative and tastefully done. Very well written all the way around. Everyone was consistantly in-character, and I especially liked the way you handled Batman :-) I really enjoyed it.