Reviews for The Path to Victory
whateves00 chapter 1 . 1/22
This is so good... Damn I wish it was longer tho. I really like to see where their relationship is heading
Afar.Mile.Away24 chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
OMG! This is one of da best Angst stories i've eva read, most of the Angst stuff I've read were way toooooo loong. Ur is perfect!

How do ya write angst stuff?

I was about to burst out crying at this I was like all, squishy inside and all.
theultamitedocfan chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
make the next chapter better if you make one
Pampers Baby Dry chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
*tears* my god, so sad! loved it!
sallie williams chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
i gaver you like chich hicks[sorry if im wrong]i like the king alot can you do me 2 things:

tell me how you enter your story on the website


write a romantic story about the king ppleeaaeesse!
MortalRemedy chapter 1 . 7/31/2006

poor Chick...

That made meh sad.. I liked it!
Crawling Elf a.k.a. ZIM chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
Damn you're freakin talented.

Characters were so real, so human and believable I was impressed, half way I was asking myself who wrote it.

I thought of this pairing but dismissed it coz the king is married, but the way you handled it, was almost like any other couple dealing with things on the reality.

The story doesn't feel forced in any way, it evolves naturally and with a good pace. Things to improve just one:keep writing.

Beautiful work I’m definitely keeping an eye on your fics.

Ham-Kelly TLTLI chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
Wow. That was good... insanely good. This is favved... I just need to log in first! _
Bingley chapter 1 . 7/24/2006

It was so sad. So deep.

taishige chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
First off, I'm not really a fan of the pairing, but I still really liked this. It was just... so real, and it made sense, lol. You're a great writer! Plus, I love how you portray the King. 3 I've liked everything you've written so far, hehehe.

*huggles her The King plushie that she wished she had if they made one*