Reviews for Ask Me To Stay
Morbubble chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
This piece was sweet, but a bittersweet. I didn't realise this was a genuine scene cut from the movie; they should have kept it :( Or they should have let him go to her world like Medusa did.

As for your story though, I really liked it. I think maybe it was a little over-emotional on Miranda's part, but apart from that (and that Sebastian's an elf), it was very well done :)
washingtongirl-91 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
ok so i read all of the voyage of the Unicorn stuff and you do a great job! i love it especially the miranda and sebastian stuff however i noticed in all your storys you say that sebastian is a dwarf, in the start of the movie (i just watched it two seconds ago)

Malachi: "i am Malachi and this is Sebasitan, we're Dwarfs"

Sebasitan: "correction, i'm an Elf he's a Dwarf"

Malachi: "and this, Professer Ainsli, is your ship."

Ainsli: "My ship?"

Malachi: "Yes and my i suggest we board" *spear thrown and bearly misses Malachi* "immedietly."

or something along those lines...

anywho so you get were i am going with this he is a elf not a dwarf or he would have the crazy eyebrows like malachi:)

the point was though i love the fluff you have with the two of them i wanted way more of that in the movie and i am glad someone else saw what it was missing:)

thank you for writing such great storys

ps..this is not suppose to be a flame so i hope it dosent come off like that:)
Angel in the Morning chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
I really liked this. I think you caught the attitudes of all of the characters really well. Good job. You should write more with them.
Laura Grey chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Aw poor Sebastian... they should be together : 3
Amashelle chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
This one flowed a lot better than the last one I reviewed. I was disappointed that they cut this scene from the movie, so it was nice to read your take on it.

I especially like that Malachi was so annoyed at Prof. Aisling for interrupting. It was a nice little note that really caught the dynamic among all the characters.
pimidawg chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
i love it it was so sad, but i really think you should make another chapter, where sebastian comes into miranda's world