I figured out why I love your writing so much. You describe everything perfectly, with such detail that you can just imagine whatever it is you're painting. But the detail isn't consuming the point of the story, it's there and it's an inside view to the characters of the story. Fantasic balance with plot and detail. That is so hard to achive. I worship you. Great chapter, great story, just... great.

WHAT!IS HE DEAD!O.o;

IS GONOU GONE NOW!IS HAKKAI BACK!HE BETTER BE ALIVE U CAN'T KILL HAKKAI!*looks around in panic*

All I have to say is that Hakkai is going to have some very serious emotional issues once this is all done. Not just him, everyone involved in this.

I love this, as I've said time and time before.

~She-Wolf

WHAAH~~

*Faints*

*Wakes up* That was BLOODY AWESOME!

All that detail... I can feel it all around me! I love the way you're able to describe all that psychological stuff in words, and make it seem so - freakishly - NORMAL!

I also really like Goku's part in this; he's such a lovable monkey... aww little monkey... *Scuffs Goku's hair*

A few typos, but not really worth mentioning. I shouldn't complain, because, well, YOU UPDATED THIS!

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"This is for when everything goes straight to hell."

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I loved that.

I love how you end tis chapter, too. Not a cliffie, but leaves a lot to be looked forward to! So keep writing!

Well, thank you so much once again! Thanks for a brilliant, brilliant read!

Gonou is quite the terrifying figure.

I'm still in love with this fic, and am at the edge of my seat as of this moment.

I'd love to see the next chapter whenever it's done.

*Blood, Rain, & Roses*

VampiregirlED

*jump up and down*

It's an update!

Another great chapter!

Can't wait to read what's going to happen next!

Please update soon!

Awesome story. Hakkai's my favorite character! This fic has so much detail and portrays Hakkai in a brand new light. Gonou's so damn creepy! Update soon!

OMG! i can't wait! what the hell? you better update really fast! hakkai's only immoblie right? and the others are gonna realize that and not hurt sanzo right? well, you had me there, so keep it up!

OMG Hakkai! Poor Gojyo! OMG, OMG, OMG! Please please please update!

it's been so long! i almost cried with happiness when i say that you added another chappy! i'm so happy! i hope you don't take as long to write the next one!

Oh. My. Gosh! DONT KILL HAKKAI! *tear* This story is amazing; you are extremely amazing. You are seriously the greatest. I ablsolutely have fallen in love with this story. It's wonderfully written and the excitement kills me. You MUST update soon or i might die from anticipation. But seriously, everytime i read a new chapter in this story, i think, "There's no way this could be better." and everytime you prove me wrong with each update. I would LOVE to see a battle between Son Goku and Gonou. that would be exhilerating...anyway, again you're awsome. Update soon!

... Dude. Go Goku!

I really enjoyed this chapter. While I'm not entirely sure if it's a good thing or not (but who am I to talk? I'm horribly sadistic in my writing, after all), but you really captured the blood thirst and murderous intent of Hakkai's... Other one. .. Gonou. Thing. Yeah.

And although there wasn't a lot of dialog, you really managed to capture Kougaiji's character and fighting style. It was like manga! ... only in text.

I'm still a little more caught up on Goku laying the beat down on Sanzo, though. I mean... just... Hell yes. xD

OH MY GOD!

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its almost evil to leave it here -sobs-

UPDATE! -Shakes you rapidly-

that was the cliffhanger of the century -tears out hair-

good job anyway XDD

kitematsu

this is really good!

nice description

update soon!

*latches onto story and trills*