Reviews for Dysphoria
Mako-clb chapter 15 . 5/13/2008
I just love this chapter. Heck, I've loved every chapter. From the way you've described Hakkai's slow descent into madness to the beauty with which you describe every battle, everything about this entire story has been practically perfect. In this chapter, I especially love the bit about "names" and how you managed to use that to make such interesting comparisons between the characters, the type that really get me thinking. Keep up the great work.
Baku-Bunny chapter 16 . 5/12/2008
Y'know I read this like a week ago and at the time I coulnd't think of what to say and now ever a week later I'm still clueless as to what to say to you. This was such an amazing chapter and such an amazing fanfic. I'm so very in love with it really. I think that if you didn't mention that there was going to be a sequel I might have been in tears! I want the sequel so bad! I want to know what happens! I think the feeling I have now waiting for the sequel is the same I've had for waiting for the rest volume of Reload to come out! I really can't wait! I hope you get it up soon! This really was an amazing fanfic! I'm going to end up reading if over and over again! It was so good! No good not even the right word! it was beyond good!
silver-eyed chapter 16 . 5/10/2008
gagh! oh no, he's gonna turn hakkai against them ! omg! well, no way that i'll miss out on the sequel, so...looking forward to that! XD
Seraph Reload chapter 16 . 5/10/2008
As always, your writing style is amazing, and how you ended this story and hinted for a sequel is beautiful.

Thanks for this wonderful Saiyuki fanfiction _
terracannon876 chapter 16 . 5/10/2008
Wow ... this was an intense story. I can't read the sequel )
ArcticPhoenix91 chapter 16 . 5/9/2008
What! You end this already! Damn you're unpredictable! Hey what's the sequel's name?

As for the story...

YEAH! Gojyo's ALIVE! Cheers

But.. hope the sequel comes fast so Hakkai can return fast too..

All in all..

Not a bad ending.

Congratulations.
nobody-nobody-nobody chapter 16 . 5/8/2008
well you sure know how to keep a reader intereseted.

I can't wait to find out what happens to Hakkai and the others. You've done a fantastic job writing it. :)
LiL PriNCeSs Me chapter 16 . 5/8/2008
yes a sequel! as i was reading this chapter i was like omg theres no way this is the last chapter it can't be. unless... theres a sequel! omigosh as usual i love the way you write! this story was just awesome. i loved gojyo and sanzo in this chapter they were perfect really, you kept them in character so well and i loved the was they interacted with eachother. this had got to be one of the number one saiyuki stories on this site right now. and i can't wait for the sequel i'll be looking for it!
Jamica chapter 16 . 5/8/2008
The part between Sanzo and Goku just before Yoane came, brought tears to my eyes :'(

I think Dysphoria is one of the best fanfictions on , and I'll be waiting for the sequel!
Torre58 chapter 16 . 5/8/2008
Oh... thank... God there’s a sequel. Or I’m seriously diving into the cyberspace and killing someone! Just kidding, of course. Please don’t call the cops on me. There really is no way I can dive into cyberspace.

Way to go with this story! I’m totally interested, and I’m glad it is continuing. I love your chemistry with the guys, especially gojyo and sanzo. Thank you, thank you for not killing Gojyo! That would have totally bummed me out.
Ophelion chapter 16 . 5/8/2008
... I don't know what to say to that.

It was good, really good. Tremendously, brilliantly, fantabulously, wondrously well-written.

It leaves me dumbfounded and falbbergasted, really.

I really love the personalities of Sanzo that you've fleshed out in this chapter. It was really sweet.

Damn, now I just want more.

MORE!

Thanks for the read and please, do keep it up. For the sake of your desperate fans, including myself. )
kerumica chapter 16 . 5/8/2008
Oh my god! I can't believe it's finally over. All I can say is this was an excellent story. You should be very proud of yourself. I look forward to the sequel :)

Thanks again for sharing.
Kitematsu chapter 16 . 5/8/2008
W.O.W that was about the MOST unexpected ending ever! never would i have thought that this story would end like that! hah but im definitely pleased that the update came so quickly :D and yay! a sequel! guess id have to look out for that too yea. love the little plot details in the chapter and the descriptions of gojyo's pain was just oh-so vivid and about perfect for visualisation purposes. thanks for writing such an AWESOME story with an AWESOME ending :P hope to see more stories soon!
The Penumbra chapter 16 . 5/8/2008
Talk about cliffhangers!

Loved this, and am so looking forward to the sequel :D
Zab Jade chapter 16 . 5/7/2008
Awesome job, Nymphy! Really nice chapter and a truly evil (but in a good way) cliffhanger. And it's also proof that our minds work in similar ways. I've had a scene planned for ages in TToC where Sanzo a cigarette in an exhausted Gojyo's mouth and lights it for him. Though it's one of Gojyo's own hi-lites.
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