|Reviews for Dueling Harmonies|
| kirallie chapter 4 . 8/19/2006
Great work! Like to see a Naruto who is smarter than he lets on. What does Kabuto want? It has to benefit him in a very big way for him to offer to help. Keep up the great work!
| Kungfu Max chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
Ok, I liked this story a lot, but it's kind of dull...the pacing dosn't really match that of your other stories. Are you just aiming for a standard romance or are you planning on their being more action? Because right now it looks like it's leaning more in the direction of a more...generic story.
And by generic, I mean Girl dosn't like Naruto, Girl falls for Naruto's cheerfulness, Girl and Naruto start dating. Although, it would seem that most stories like this actually should have "guy" instead of girl, because SasuNaru has taken over this website.
But I like this pairing...and there arn't many out there. Your writing is solid, but I think that you should try and take the story in a new direction.
| hurleysuki chapter 4 . 8/18/2006
Aaw. Gaara has a crush on Tayuya-chan. *sigh* This is a problem. I wonder who gives her the flute first. At least let Gaara get there first. Then Naruto. She could use Gaara's for fighting and Naruto's for playing music.
| DarkPhoenix2500 chapter 4 . 8/18/2006
Ooh...a Naru/Tayu/Gaara love triangle _ thats interesting...feel kinda bad for gaara though _ ah cant wait to see where this goes
| Regres chapter 4 . 8/17/2006
i love this story continue soon
| some guy chapter 4 . 8/16/2006
| Lycan Elder chapter 4 . 8/16/2006
I look forward to your next update. Wonder if you going to make a love triangle? Either way I don't care. Since you stated that its a Naruto x Tayuya. The the outcome is already known.
Anyways keep up the good work.
| Kalis-nin chapter 4 . 8/16/2006
oh! does gaara like tayuya too. how will naruto act in this new development? this will get so interesting. update
| Kitsune6 chapter 4 . 8/16/2006
It's "in tow" not in toe. As in a tow truck.
I loved evil, clever Naruto. And the NaruTayu stuff. And the ShikaTema bits. But what's ahead for Tayuya? Two guys fighting over her? And what about Hinata? Keep up the great work, I'm adding this to my alerts.
| saiyan prince1 chapter 4 . 8/15/2006
wow great fic
| Jadedmagus chapter 4 . 8/15/2006
An awesome fic to start with, you had me hooked from chapter one. That said, this chapter really raised the bar! Great work, I sure hope to see more of this!
| Aidis chapter 4 . 8/15/2006
TWO FLUTES? ARGH! You make me so angry! And yet... I can't help but long to find out what happens next! THE CONFUSION! Update soon!
| E.A.W.A.F chapter 4 . 8/14/2006
Accelerando. Gaara was a plus in this chapter. I think you presented his thought process and character we'll while also expanding upon it by having him by a flute for Tayuya. I'm VERY interested to find out what he actually thinks about her. Tayuya herself is handled well in this chapter. Her interaction with Temari and Gaara was good and how gaara read into her actions more insight onto how gaara thinks. I really enjoyed how you 'exposed' a sensitive side of her by having her compose music. I know she uses a flute in battle but in the end i just never really think about her having such a soft spot. I found the scene about her music very entertaining and i'm looking forward to her reaction from both Gaara and Naruto's gifts.
Oh, another thing i thought was clever was how the 'number one surprising/unperdictible ninja' came into play when Naruto figured out Tsunades plan and turned it around on her for his own advantages.
I am curious what Kabuto and Jiraiya are going to talk about, i've never really pegged Kabuto as a traitor to his cause but i guess ill just have to wait and see. Anyway I'm looking forward to the next update. Goodbye and good luck :)
| DarkJackel chapter 4 . 8/14/2006
Interesting, one can only ponder how these various things will develope. Also how Naruto shall improve his skills.
Thanks for the chapter.
| BigQuise chapter 4 . 8/14/2006
Is Gaara going to go after Tayuya as well, or what? Great chapter by the way.