|Reviews for Beyond|
| night animal chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Many interesting thoughts! I very much enjoyed reading this story. I really like the way you portray God/Jesus/the loving creator. He's not just a symbol but a person. The wraith is kind of cute too!:)
| princessangelwings chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
okay, a bit strage, but good non the less.
| Queen of the Red Skittle chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
Well, well, well - back from the dead, are we? Whoot! *laugh* Ahem - back to your story: I'm very interested in how you develope this. Very ... original with lots of potential!
However, I have some advice: In most of your stories, I found that you jumped right in them and didn't really explain what was happening. I understand that this is only the first chapter and maybe you have plans of really going in depth of what just took place, but just keep in mind that it can get confusing after a while and it's rather hard to enjoy a story - no matter how good it is - if you are confused. Just some advice so you don't lose readers.