|Reviews for The Offer|
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 5 . 3/9
I loved all their thoughts especially what to include and not include. I still think Liz should have explained future max before departure or right after. I loved max and Liz's thoughts and comments and max doubts about whether he deserves Liz or the feeling Liz has for him. I loved the dress comment and how max loved how easy it was to take off. Loved their ability to feel each other. I am glad it is decided to tone down just how destructive Michael can be with little effort. I love seeing and comparing the different aspects of each couple. I kind of wish after departure or before we knew and saw more about antar and them fighting the war and getting allies or having more guards sent to them to have them trained and protected. I never liked tess or her being with Max and having his son. I am hoping that gets changed or resolved somehow. Love Maria and Michael...
Loved Michael's thoughts especially him thinking about his time spent bonding and getting to know Liz and each telling the other about their best friend. Gotta love Michael and max. It is strange how the two girls who are best friends and almost sisters fell in love with Max and Michael who are best friends and almost brothers. What are the odds? Good odds though...
Loved Michael's reasoning for what max did and how he felt especially about Liz and why he would stare and admire her from afar because in reality he was just shy and other stuff from being able to talk to Liz other than in class. Great chapter loved everyone thoughts and feelings and such...
Glad Michael finally understood why Maria kept coming back to him and the one thing Michael has on Max is that Michael may push but he never wanted Maria out of his life or thought what max did with Liz sometimes.
Great story and chapter...
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 4 . 2/23
very interesting chapter..
very detailed and intricate. all the characters were captured very well. I love that it is a democracy but everyone still looks to Max to lead.
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 3 . 2/22
From last chapter...
I am curious why max couldn't feel Liz but she could feel him.
Good detailed chapter...
I am curious of who exactly Dave is and same for Ray...
I loved Maria's reaction when she saw Michael and same with Liz and max. How did they know max created the diamond for the engagement ring and why we're they analyzing it?
Wow watching them for years and how did they know Alex death was alien related?
How come Dave didn't ask about tess and does Dave know about Kyle and Liz's abilities?
Why study their abilities? It seems like Dave was hired by someone else why?
Why wouldn't certain of his plans come to be for years to come?
Looking forward to reading more...
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 2 . 2/22
Nice chapter everyone waking up three days later is interesting. Why did they put the symbol in max drawer and why the particular order of them being in the rooms? I loved Maria feeling Michael and her comment about not missing him off because it wasn't a nice feeling. I am assuming they don't know about Kyle and Liz's powers and loved Kyle's phrase about it. How did they shut off so to speak max and the others powers? Did the specific gas do something to keep them asleep for days and to shut their powers down? Apparently people have watched and research them for quite some time.
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 1 . 2/21
Interesting start and my curiosity peaked...
I loved the description of max and Liz while sleeping that was very poetic.
| ljcolic chapter 15 . 2/17
Love the way the story builds!
And all the details and how it all fits :)))
I will definitely read it all and than again and again ...
Max-Kyle History assignments can you send them to me :)
Thank you and keep writing
| kkcnelson2002 chapter 54 . 8/23/2013
I just found your story and am amazed at the amount of detail you write. This story is truly in the top 3 or 4 I have ever read on this site. I one of my favorites I have ever read! Thank you for shared it with us and I look forward to reading the next book.
| fictionaljunkie chapter 42 . 5/1/2013
thank you for writing so much and not stopping because your stories keep my love for roswell going :)
| Sweetheart-Holmes chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Well apart fom the fact that after reading this I picks up the phone and screamed in utter excitement down the line to my sister who is also a Roswell die hard! I study professional writing an have not found anything on this site to satiate both the fangirl in me and also the writer/editor. This is absolutely amazing. Perfect tenses, fantastic point of view. Hardly any grammar problems an sent my heart racing and I couldn't wipe the smile off my face. You're amazing and I'm addicted !
Thanks do much, you made my day!
| HarryMalfoy09 chapter 54 . 6/2/2012
That was a good chapter. loved the whole story, I could hardly stop reading. Is there more to this? It's kind of a cliffy...
| cjsl8ne chapter 54 . 6/1/2012
Thanks for the preview! It was great! I am so looking forward to see how everything has changed in the eight years and to get answers to so many questions! Hurry back with the rest!(big grin)
| missa78rat chapter 54 . 5/31/2012
1st this story is awesome! easy to read and keeps u interested. my brother told me about this and how he was hooked and got me hooked on it. we have long discussions about future plot lines and what this or that means and i can honestly say i truly enjoyed reading this and couldnt put it down. cant wait for the next book and dont know what ill read in the meantime! so thanks and keepem coming!
| Her-Imaginarium chapter 54 . 5/30/2012
This is amazing... Thank you so much for continuing this! Thank you for giving us more Roswell.
I love this story!
| cjsl8ne chapter 53 . 5/28/2012
Congratulations on finishing this great story. I always thought this story was far too well done to not be finished. I am eagerly awaiting the second story in your series. Eight years... there are bound to be some major changes. Can't wait to see if anyone decides to enlarge their families and to finally learn what has been motivating Dave this entire time. Hurry back with some of part two soon!
| maipigen chapter 53 . 5/22/2012
First off Misha, congrats on "finally" completing book one, I bet you're conflicted right now hehe. I can't tell you my favorite part, because there was so many, but at least in this chapter I loved Liz glaring off Jake while protecting Max. Sweet and so them because in reverse, Max would've done the same (except mayve with real power behind the glare, but still).
Really well done and I can't wait till book 2, whenever that may beging - I need some answers soon!