Reviews for The Mating Frenzy
Sage of Wind Dragons chapter 21 . 10/25/2015
your really giving Jirayia some shit. I mean he IS a Powerful guy you know? none of this going out of shape thing... besides TSUNADE who was in retirement should really... grrr.
Afshar chapter 6 . 10/25/2015
This suff is so funny man! well done! keep going!
Synn Nexus chapter 33 . 10/7/2015
That was hilarious! XD
I don't understand why it was so difficult for someone to explain it to Naruto.
TheNineTailedNinja chapter 7 . 9/14/2015
This story is hilarious XD. Nice princess bride reference btw ;)
xxxNimeriAxxx chapter 33 . 9/13/2015
The only thing, that I have to say is that there is not one other story that I have laughed while reading as much as while reading this one. It was an amazing pleasure reading this thing. You wrote it very sweet, for an M (I mean that there wasn't a lemon, but it was worth the M for other reasons).
Thank you for writhing this story and if you have the time - write something more, I believe that it would be worth reading.
:)
El Lobo de Rey chapter 29 . 9/5/2015
i could not stop laughing, you should do a version of this with ACTUAL sex scenes lol
Staggered Pichu chapter 6 . 8/22/2015
Oh my gosh, ahahaha. The end of chapter 6... -"Yeah, girls bleed when they get cut, but…" Naruto's eyes went wide, "They also bleed… WITHOUT GETTING ANY CUTS AT ALL!"-

I found that just hilarious. XD
Staggered Pichu chapter 1 . 8/22/2015
I'm no where near finishing this (no duh, right?) But I just had to leave you a review. I was having such trouble suppressing my laughter as I giggled right along with Kakashi. This story is delightful so far. Now, please excuse me while I return to reading it.
TangyCitrus chapter 33 . 8/22/2015
hahahahahaahah this was such fun and crazy to read! i love the alternate endings and the changes made to each one; had some good laughs in those as well as in the rest of the story.
Question though, how was Naruto in third place for most babies fathered in .3? He only had 3 children, one each from Hinata, Ino and Sakura, right? It just seems like a big jump from Itachi's 22, Gai & Kakashi's 14 each and then Naruto's 3? Did no one else have a higher number of babies than 3?
oh also, when did Temari and Naruto have sex to result in the blonde and bright blue eyed baby in .2 ( i think it was)?
well anyways, enough with the questions, let me just say thank you for writing and d this!
take care and have fun!
and i know what you said about the sequel not actually happening but i still want to say this regardless, "Please do it! Make the Anti-Mating Frenzy happen!" hahaha XP
okay that's all.
bye~
Great chapter 33 . 8/21/2015
It gave me some laughs, I must admit that Ending 3 is the one I like the most, although I would have liked other details. Oh well, Looking forward to more!
Raven Blanchard chapter 13 . 8/15/2015
Lol poor Kakashi he's like dying due to oversexing! :)))
someone chapter 14 . 8/13/2015
LOLOLOLOLOL
THAT SUSHI THING WAS HILARIOUS LMAO
Bittersweet Horonigai chapter 33 . 8/2/2015
A great story, with great moments, especially the endings.
Toni Koehler chapter 30 . 7/17/2015
I like the pairings for this ending better GaaraANBU Hinatanaruto and all the others I loved the demon spawn thing and now I really want a fox-human-demon-spawn-child it would be adorable! I hope one day u can write more :3
Toni Koehler chapter 32 . 7/17/2015
I got to say I liked ending one better mostly the DEMON SPAWN! part :P and I want the fox-human-demon-spawn baby
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