Reviews for Wipe My Wand
siriusismyhero chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
D'aw!

I've read this story before, I think. Or one similar to it. I think you managed to not make it awkward - I'm just glad it's not porn. Cus I'm not sure I could've dealt with that, lol. Ew.

Though...I have been trying to figure out how to do something sort of similar myself - but with an OC and Snape. Don't ask. Please, don't ask, lol.
elliott ashes chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
The title is definitely something you would come up with, Maxine.

I don't normally like lemons, but this was good. You wrote it tastefully and didn't go into bizarre detail or include any anatomically incorrect descriptions (there are way too many 11-year-olds on this site trying to write erotica. It's disturbing on many levels).

I like that bits of humor you added, and how the ending describes the characters' feelings in a way that makes sense without getting overly sappy.

Great job.
albe-chan chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
first may i just say THAT WAS HI-EFFING-LARIOUS!

ahem...anyhow, now i must put in the few critique points that occurred to me...and trust me there are only a few.

first off, i thought it seemed a tad rushed towards the ending, but since it was your first lemon, it will be forgiven.

secondly, i thought 'wiping his wand' meant...well..."wiping" his "wand"...but then, im a pervert.

anyhow, other than that, i loved the idea, i think you are exceedingly creative, and i would just caution you to not rush through it so fast, and check the few grammatical and spelling errors...although, no one is perfect...

all in all, good work!
40steps2themoon chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
LOL, funny. I don't really like Percy that much, but this was very good. Loved the writing. Very amusing and interesting.

-Allison
LastOfTheSummerWine chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
knew Percy was a dolt. :) nice "behind-the-scenes" story. And awesome username.
Watch Out for Yellow Moon chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
This is too sweet! Great job!

Peace,

Yellow Moon
rockergurl13 chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
WOW! i REALLY liked this! it was cute. it's going on my favorites
wimsette chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
*Squue!* - That was very lovely, daahlinngg! P You submitted a review to my story, as well, if you can't remember... As far as your story goes, very shmexy! ;D Penny's got it goin' on! Ha, there are a few spelling errors, but (blegh, as I found out the evil way!) erasing, fixing, and then reposting erases comments (sorry.. :'( that's why ur comment's gone now...). Anyway, I'm in the middle of writing Simply Conceited's sequel (although it'll probably be posted as another one-shot... eh...), so check it out once it's up!
x Veela x chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
Well, I read this because I liked your name, but now I think I like your stories too!

It's a very interesting pairing and an amusing fic, well don * Imperial Princess *
BiteMeFerret chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Original, very. Nicely done.
scary-dude-on-sugar-high chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
wow...i dun thnk i've eva seen an author tht hyper abt a review...lol...and i didn't even take the proper time to be nice...lolness...

anyway. this one was nice too, but i like "Lets Make a Deal" betta. itz FUNNIE!

lolness...i'm obsessed with tht word...
goldenbubbles chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
That was sweet yet strange, i liked it!
Julia Griever chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
ha ha ha ha i love love love it! i should post mine on my site...of course, i havent written anything on hewre for YEARS upon YEARS...

love you!
Joji Sada chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
That was incredibly sweet. I'm not much for a percy or Gilderoy anyone but this had an appeal to it...and there was no awkwardness. I would love to see more from you...This was incredible..._
Captain Cheese chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
LOL that has to be the most interesting coupling I have EVER read on here lol

Good job :p