|Reviews for Wipe My Wand|
| siriusismyhero chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
I've read this story before, I think. Or one similar to it. I think you managed to not make it awkward - I'm just glad it's not porn. Cus I'm not sure I could've dealt with that, lol. Ew.
Though...I have been trying to figure out how to do something sort of similar myself - but with an OC and Snape. Don't ask. Please, don't ask, lol.
| elliott ashes chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
The title is definitely something you would come up with, Maxine.
I don't normally like lemons, but this was good. You wrote it tastefully and didn't go into bizarre detail or include any anatomically incorrect descriptions (there are way too many 11-year-olds on this site trying to write erotica. It's disturbing on many levels).
I like that bits of humor you added, and how the ending describes the characters' feelings in a way that makes sense without getting overly sappy.
| albe-chan chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
first may i just say THAT WAS HI-EFFING-LARIOUS!
ahem...anyhow, now i must put in the few critique points that occurred to me...and trust me there are only a few.
first off, i thought it seemed a tad rushed towards the ending, but since it was your first lemon, it will be forgiven.
secondly, i thought 'wiping his wand' meant...well..."wiping" his "wand"...but then, im a pervert.
anyhow, other than that, i loved the idea, i think you are exceedingly creative, and i would just caution you to not rush through it so fast, and check the few grammatical and spelling errors...although, no one is perfect...
all in all, good work!
| 40steps2themoon chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
LOL, funny. I don't really like Percy that much, but this was very good. Loved the writing. Very amusing and interesting.
| LastOfTheSummerWine chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
knew Percy was a dolt. :) nice "behind-the-scenes" story. And awesome username.
| Watch Out for Yellow Moon chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
This is too sweet! Great job!
| rockergurl13 chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
WOW! i REALLY liked this! it was cute. it's going on my favorites
| wimsette chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
*Squue!* - That was very lovely, daahlinngg! P You submitted a review to my story, as well, if you can't remember... As far as your story goes, very shmexy! ;D Penny's got it goin' on! Ha, there are a few spelling errors, but (blegh, as I found out the evil way!) erasing, fixing, and then reposting erases comments (sorry.. :'( that's why ur comment's gone now...). Anyway, I'm in the middle of writing Simply Conceited's sequel (although it'll probably be posted as another one-shot... eh...), so check it out once it's up!
| x Veela x chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
Well, I read this because I liked your name, but now I think I like your stories too!
It's a very interesting pairing and an amusing fic, well don ~*~ Imperial Princess ~*~
| BiteMeFerret chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Original, very. Nicely done.
| scary-dude-on-sugar-high chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
wow...i dun thnk i've eva seen an author tht hyper abt a review...lol...and i didn't even take the proper time to be nice...lolness...
anyway. this one was nice too, but i like "Lets Make a Deal" betta. itz FUNNIE!
lolness...i'm obsessed with tht word...
| goldenbubbles chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
That was sweet yet strange, i liked it!
| Julia Griever chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
ha ha ha ha i love love love it! i should post mine on my site...of course, i havent written anything on hewre for YEARS upon YEARS...
| Joji Sada chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
That was incredibly sweet. I'm not much for a percy or Gilderoy anyone but this had an appeal to it...and there was no awkwardness. I would love to see more from you...This was incredible..._
| Captain Cheese chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
LOL that has to be the most interesting coupling I have EVER read on here lol
Good job :p