Reviews for Lost
cody chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
sakura killer chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
hey can you update ya got a good story goin
crushedpromises chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
heys, it's me la. (:

i thinkk, just a bit of constructive criticism from me;

the first chapter is a bit to sudden?

like, obviously from the title of the fanfic,

someone's gonna get lost blah blah blah.

but maybe the first chapter could've had

a bit more action then leading to

temari and naruto getting lost? :/

cuz then, the intro isn't that good. :L

you know, i think this chapter would've

also been alot better if you wrote it all

in 1st person. from naruto and temari. :]

BUT, apart from that.

the descriptions are all very good. -winks-


Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
great story. keep writing.
Houkou 121 chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
so when is this gona get another chap? if ever?
MYsasuke-kun chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
hey that was actually pretty good for a beginning. i liked it. please come out with some more soon. i wanna see how this turns out.
Anal Sewage chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
pretty good :D
nine-tailkyuubi chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
cool i want to no what happens next!
Pamisha the Infernal chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
good chapter! _
The big M chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
no you killed sasuke sakura no
darkcarnage chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
Good start. I hope you continue this.
grey fox chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
You're not going to finish this are you. you little #%* head!
iwantitunique chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
that was cool plz update soon
onion926 chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
you mentioned that you were co-writing, one of you for temari and the other for naruto. i know you are worried about the transitions, but actually, i think that your differing styles could be good for this story. it would make the contrast between temari and naruto more prominent, and emphasize the fact that they are completely different people and that they will perceive things in different ways. so, i don't think you should worry too much about your two's writing styles. the variation will make it interesting. [plus i just like unconventional writing, heheh...]

this looks to be an interesting fic! i hope to see more soon!
grey fox chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
THAT WAS GREAT! Heh heh I wonder what Tamari was thinking, when she took a step closer! (laphs slyly). And DON'T BE A LAZY PRICK LIKE THE OTHERS! I'd like to keep reading!
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