Reviews for Invisible Monsters
Laurially chapter 20 . 7/28/2013
This is the best, most confusing, wonderfully wibbley wobbley timey wimey story I have ever read. Any whovian would be proud :) x
TheOncomingWolf chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Good start I like it already!x
Genesis Chi chapter 9 . 6/18/2013
I laughed so hard at the plan of Rose and Doctor as a "Breeding pair" - seriously well done, I'm gonna remember that forever.
atimelady chapter 20 . 10/26/2009
So the whole thing was a dream?

Thank god! I thought Rose and the Doctor were dead!

Whew! Thats a relief!

Good story by the way!
atimelady chapter 17 . 10/26/2009
I is pretty sure the Daleks were created by a scientist not evolved.

But I love it anyways!
atimelady chapter 16 . 10/26/2009
Brilliant story!

Just one thing that bugged me this chapter was that the Doctor doesn't need his glasses. He just uses them to look smart :)

He said so in that time crash minisode thing.

Still love the story though!
chocolatecake123 chapter 20 . 8/6/2008
Woah!

That was awesome! It really was! The only thing I don't like is that he techically never told Rose he loved her *sniff* ]

Anyway I'm not sure if you've done a sequal so i'm gonna go look, i hope you have *fingers crossed*. If you haven't im going to be sad, :(.

Anway this story was so good, and I hate odd-jar shes a biatch. But she died so woop woop.

Excellent story, going to read your others :D

sorry i rambeled, but hey it was worth a ramble i feel, this story is genious.

ha sorry i'll stop now.x
Dalakh chapter 20 . 1/16/2007
bloody brilliant! thought is now 12.15am and i have headache... oh well :D excellent story! but now i am gonna crawl into bed _
timano chapter 20 . 10/25/2006
What a marvelous story! I enjoyed the character of Odjya immensely-sort of the opposite of the TV series Time Lords. And there's room for a sequel too-Odjya isn't positively dead, after all...

10 out of 10 stars
past-and-pending chapter 20 . 10/23/2006
been reading this story since the beginning but have been to lazy to review

i loved this all the way through, though you had me conserned for a minute there that you actually killed rose

also i was so glad odd-jar( hahah)died, she was kind of annoying but thats a sign of a good author that the reader has a gut reaction to the characters

great job
pucktofaerie chapter 20 . 10/23/2006
So that's how it ends. Well, congratulations. Finishing a story is a major feat. I love how it all came together in the end. And O-bitch died not one, but 2 horrible deaths. Brilliant! Hope to see more from you soon!
forestwife chapter 20 . 10/21/2006
yay! The Doctor saved Rose! Very clever, him going back in time and seeing himself like that. A brilliant story, I'm a bit sad that it finished... Do another story! lol
CptAlbertWesker chapter 20 . 10/21/2006
Must say I got a little confused at first about half way through; and then I realised what you were doing and it all fit very nicely into place _

A fitting end to a fantastic story :D
blackhairdye chapter 20 . 10/21/2006
Wow! Great, Fantastic story! I loved it! Barely any stories have the Doctor going back in time to fix things. I've looked everywhere for one! Yay you!
ladysnight chapter 20 . 10/21/2006
great final chapter!I can't wait till you write more fanfic! ( i did find parts of it 'freakin hilarious' lol:-p)
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