Reviews for Sickness within Oneself
Kurissyma san Tybalt chapter 2 . 6/24/2007
It's good- but you keep switching between POVs, it's kinda confusing. "I blushed when he said her name" etc.
winglessfairy25 chapter 5 . 6/24/2007
This was a bit rushed but I'm really interested in the next chapters. So far, a little proof reading might do but you're doing a good job. ja!

YourFavouitePlushie chapter 5 . 6/22/2007
I like this, an update would be great! Wonderful kissing scene on the last chapter as well.

I'm really hoping Riza doesn't die, and hoping for more kissing scenes as well. Keep it up. XD
ruby32alchemist chapter 5 . 6/22/2007
you aren't going to make this wonderful story in a sad one are you? PLS DON'T KILL RIZA! well it's up to you really, whatever you chose is fine by me. even though, if it turns out a sad one i'll still read it
HopelessDeath-73 chapter 4 . 3/28/2007
I really like this story.

I know what it feels like to have a loved one go threw something like that.

I know you haven't updated in a while, but I want to now what happens so please update soon.

Love and Peace

SaffirDerya chapter 4 . 9/23/2006
Their first kiss, yes! I was waiting for that for a long time in the show, I'm just starting the manga so I only have the first one...It's great to have you back, I hope you enjoyed your vacation!
SaffirDerya chapter 2 . 7/29/2006
That is so cute but so sad! I can't wait for more!
Short Witty Name Goes Here chapter 2 . 7/29/2006
I have one more thing to say UPDATE when you can...UPDATE...sorry just take your time...update! what ever i hate being schizophrenic they tell me things...what ever update when you can

Later Days

Dementia, Helga Phoebe and Lois-the little voices
Short Witty Name Goes Here chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
thats a good start so update! theres my 'positive' reinforcement, sorry i dont like the word positive any way this storys got potential so UPDATE!
affinityreign chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
it's good, it just seems really blunt. but -shurggs- if your going for different it's good. i like how you made Roy actually do his paper work.
Hotori chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
You could make it more detailed, and use more discriptive words to make this story more...touching or more realistic