LOVED IT.

I think you did great! And you should write more!

It great how you take the original story p and change it to something else please make more

HATE YOU

I liked it.

Awww that was so cute! I felt so sad when Obito "died" because I love him like crazy. Hes probably my favorite character. But for some reason I've always prefered KakaRin over ObiRin. From the way Kakashi reacted after he killed Rin, I keep thinking they could have turned into something more.

This was really, really sweet. More innocent than I expected, but it was a good surprise and I liked it. I especially loved how they laughed at the mistakes and... oh, everything.

Pretty good for your first time writing something like this.

Noooooooo, I wanted a lemon so badly!
I love the way you write, and things were going great, and when I saw that you didn't write the most important part (for me, at least), I was kinda disappointed :(
Nonetheless, it was very very sweet 3

Can you give another chapter please

Glad to have finally read Rin and Kakashi fic.

Although, I'll be honest I was hoping for a lemon, but it doesn't really matter. I still thought there was enough feeling and passion in your fic that more than made up for that.

Overall a nice one shot, was happy that Rin didn't have to go through with it in the end.

That was so ... so ... YOUTHFUL W and awesome x3 Really gotta love Kakarin ;3 Very good job *thumbs up*

It is a cute story though it rated M :x
And also touching too the part when Rin looks into the eyes of 2 mans who love her the most :x

Undeniably sweet.

Good story. I thoroughly enjoyed it and it entertained me. I don't think I saw any mistakes or grammar errors. That's about all I have to say. Well written [:

Very sweet, very neat, yak yak yak (insert generic gushing here.)

I was honestly surprised by the ending. The overall tone seemed too dark to allow such a fluffy end. Not bad, per say, just incongruous.

I really should read more KakaRin,

O. Noah