Reviews for One night |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Possessive Kakashi is the best Kakashi :) |
![]() ![]() I am sad i didn't get the lemon, but how you wrote everything made it okay that i didn't get it. It was beautiful and it was lovely. Great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() wish you made another chapter |
![]() ![]() LOVED IT. |
![]() ![]() I think you did great! And you should write more! |
![]() ![]() It great how you take the original story p and change it to something else please make more |
![]() ![]() HATE YOU |
![]() ![]() I liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww that was so cute! I felt so sad when Obito "died" because I love him like crazy. Hes probably my favorite character. But for some reason I've always prefered KakaRin over ObiRin. From the way Kakashi reacted after he killed Rin, I keep thinking they could have turned into something more. This was really, really sweet. More innocent than I expected, but it was a good surprise and I liked it. I especially loved how they laughed at the mistakes and... oh, everything. |
![]() ![]() Pretty good for your first time writing something like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooooooo, I wanted a lemon so badly! I love the way you write, and things were going great, and when I saw that you didn't write the most important part (for me, at least), I was kinda disappointed :( Nonetheless, it was very very sweet 3 |
![]() ![]() Can you give another chapter please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to have finally read Rin and Kakashi fic. Although, I'll be honest I was hoping for a lemon, but it doesn't really matter. I still thought there was enough feeling and passion in your fic that more than made up for that. Overall a nice one shot, was happy that Rin didn't have to go through with it in the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so ... so ... YOUTHFUL W and awesome x3 Really gotta love Kakarin ;3 Very good job *thumbs up* |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is a cute story though it rated M :x And also touching too the part when Rin looks into the eyes of 2 mans who love her the most :x |