|Reviews for Heartbeat|
| RCJ chapter 17 . 7/15/2013
HOLY FRACK THAT WAS AMAZING I WAS ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT THE WHOLE TIME! Love this! Great work, would love to see this as an actual episode!
| Noninone chapter 17 . 7/24/2010
Hey, maybe you should add the "complete" on the Stories Properties because I almost didn't read this awesome story since I thought it wasn't finished. And seeing it's like 3 years old I wasn't going to start it and be left hagging, you know ;D
So if you want, do that. Who knows how many other people thought like me and had missed your story by mistake.
I loved your story ;D
| The Assassin's Pen chapter 17 . 9/30/2008
There are very few things that reveal my seemingly supernatural talent of being able to survive without air for a very very very long time like this story did! I Don't think I took a breath from the beginning to the end, that was pure gold, thanks so much!
| V.R. Jennings chapter 17 . 8/4/2008
Excellent! Loved it! Keep up the good work!
| HAMUCHA chapter 17 . 3/19/2008
You sure can write heartbreaking scenes. I honest to God cried!
Anyway, I’m really glad Dean was finally okay.
But I’m not too crazy with how some things were settled.
“There’s nothing on the other side” is totally not true! What a sad way to end their journey of fighting evil! And John. So he and Dean never spoke even after Dean woke up? After the heart-wrenching lines about him weeping over his son? And Dean was still hurting for thinking his father never called or came to him, right?
| HAMUCHA chapter 6 . 3/17/2008
Just has to drop by and say I LOVE THIS STORY! Can't to read till the end. I really hope John showed up.
| Sakura123 chapter 17 . 5/22/2007
Oh yeah, this was certainly a class A fanfiction, especially for a Supernatural-1st. I really loved how you managed to set up a storyline and plot behind the dilemma the Brothers were facing, and that it wasn't purely for the sake of "Dean Torture" or Hurt!Dean/Concerned!Sam as the .. erm, catchphrases go nowadays on this web site. I'll admit, at first, the story seemed a little shaky, especially with the rehash of Dean's cardiac problems from the episode "Faith". But as the ball rolled on, my doubts were steadily hushed and I enjoyed the ride. You certainly did confuse and surprise me in most moments of several chapters (especially with Mr. Alban and Sam's perception in Dean's Hospital room. Talk about a mind trip.), and it paid off quite well, since we got something of a explanation from Caleb (good ol' Caleb). Lastly, you basically got the Brothers (John, Caleb, and whomever else appeared in the series) spot on; From Sam's determination to Dean's bad temperament (among other quirks), they reminded you of the characters in the TV Show.
All in all I enjoyed this story.
Good Job. Keep up the good work!
| November'sGuest chapter 17 . 5/20/2007
I, for one, think this was a very good story. It was unique and all angsty without being over the top. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.
| DarthJackie chapter 17 . 5/20/2007
Awesome ending. I'm glad the glass wall and everything was explained...I think I get it.
| The Cat's Whiskers chapter 17 . 5/19/2007
Just to say enjoyed this - liked how you get the story accurate (you don't break curses) and also how the Winchesters rightly got angry - sure the Alban family were scared and desperate, but allowing 20 innocent people to die because of it is no excuse. Very good story!
| Variou5 chapter 17 . 5/18/2007
just wanted to let you know, this is a great story, loved it from beginning to end. you write very well. i really enjoyed it. :)
| X5vale chapter 17 . 5/18/2007
And this was giving you issues?
I love it.
I'm just sorry I'm not able to write more meaningful review, you'd deserve it.
Geat fic btw.
| AlmostHeaven chapter 17 . 5/18/2007
Bravo! That was wonderful!
| heather03nmg chapter 17 . 5/18/2007
Aww, I loved this story. It was amazing from start to finish and I'm sad that its over.
The plot was incredible with the ghosts, the curse, and the banshee.
The boys were perfectly written, absolutely true to character.
Best of all was hurt, dying Dean being taken care of by his little brother. Boy did that make for some emotional reading!
You have such talent and I'm so glad you shared this story with us! Now on to the next one!
| cHoCoLaTe-cHiHuAhUa chapter 16 . 4/7/2007
Great story so far!