Reviews for Rubies & Sapphires Book 1
shade the hegdehog chapter 1 . 9/6
naruto us a savage
scaryorange chapter 5 . 6/29
im really feelin the cringe
scaryorange chapter 4 . 6/29
See what i mean? it pretty much butchered Jaraiya and his first meeting.
scaryorange chapter 3 . 6/29
dawg, just let the story follow it's normal path at times like this... naruto keeps interrupting the plot by saying/doing things ahead of time. It makes naruto particularly annoying.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/21
Is he still wearing the mask?
Zach chapter 1 . 4/27
Uhh that is hilarious "shinobi raised (not one) but BOTH eyebrows
Draco321 chapter 9 . 4/1
more chapters please
Crusade chapter 9 . 1/22
Beside if naruto didnt go all out, then how come he blackout and tie with him?
Crusade chapter 9 . 1/22
I dont understand why you made someone like itachi, kumo has to tailed beast.
The eight tails inside killer b, and the two tails inside yugito...
And besides you named him itachi...
Naruto should have won... I know you supposed to make it hard for naruto but still... Would have been a lot better ending with him winning...
Ailurus chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
Ok... just a little thing that bugs me. When you say that youre gonna become the "Third" and complete the Sannin of the NaruxKure pairing, it comes off as a bit cocky. Just my first impression.
Blazestar123 chapter 9 . 11/1/2015
Next chapter? This was getting good!
jeppew123 chapter 4 . 8/29/2015
Why is it naruto suddenly becomes so weak in the final...
crusade11225 chapter 4 . 8/29/2015
Why does everyone call narutos father arashi? his name is minato namikaze... and modified shunshin? it's called hirashin no jutsu or flying raijin no jutsu in the english series, and jiraiya has no idea how to do that jutsu, minato only learned from the nidaimes notes on it, and btw there is no yellow light when he uses it, he's called yellow flash becourse he is the fastes person to ever live AND has yellow hair... there is only a yellow flash in the games becourse of his nickname, and the shunshin isn't a teloportation jutsu like the hirashin/flying rajin. shunshin no jutsu is just a jutsu that gives you a burst of speed while hiraishin is a jutsu that makes you teleport from you're location the the jutsu formula that you can place with a single touch of your palm, or put it on some tri pronged kunai, and frogs? WTF its toads... comon man...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
The wasy you made Sasuke realize that love and compasssion is the way to be a strong ninja makes it seem like he will be a good person. But since in the summary you said he was bashed i hope u don't contradict yourselof
Guest chapter 9 . 7/13/2015
FUCK YES
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