|Reviews for In the Field|
| Delusional Illusionist chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
This was good. It flowed together really well.
| Lover of Angelus chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Nice. Good flow.
| Darlian chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
"I am alone." His voice had a desperate sound.
Another slap. Harder. The man was on hands and knees now, his face inches from the officer's boots.
Amazing. I loved how you never name the characters, and how you tell the story from the other side's point-of-view. Powerful ending.
Keep up the superb writing.
| L J Groundwater chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
"Who needs courage if he is not afraid?"
A perfectly worded question that sums up heroism quite well.
I am impressed.
I sense English is not your first language, but I'm not sure? You've done a fine job with this piece.