Reviews for In the Field
Delusional Illusionist chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
This was good. It flowed together really well.
Lover of Angelus chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Nice. Good flow.
Darlian chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
"I am alone." His voice had a desperate sound.

Another slap. Harder. The man was on hands and knees now, his face inches from the officer's boots.

Amazing. I loved how you never name the characters, and how you tell the story from the other side's point-of-view. Powerful ending.

Keep up the superb writing.
L J Groundwater chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
"Who needs courage if he is not afraid?"

A perfectly worded question that sums up heroism quite well.

I am impressed.

I sense English is not your first language, but I'm not sure? You've done a fine job with this piece.