Reviews for Desire
Crimson lantern chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Utterly adorable! It's very good and I pass on congrats!
Guardian Radiance chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
WHO ARE YOU CALLING SO SHORT THAT SHE COULD DROWN IS A SINGLE DROP OF WATER!

*pants* Humph! Oh...*sweatdrop* Sorry about that. I got carried away again didn't I? Sorry! By the way, that was such a cute one shot! I loved it! Have you read my story? If not, can you? I need critism if I want to become a better authouress but everyone is only givuing me commpleiments! Can you or I'll bug the hell out of you until you do!
MiyokoCAR chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
AWESOMENESS! XD
GraceMac chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
aw smut and fluff... you did a perfect jobdoing both..
Myownlife12 chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
I am more in to full out slash fics, but I have been really getting into POV stories ans this is just added onto my list. Like the other reviewer said "You said a lot in few words" and it is true. I really felt the scared lust that was going on between them. So keep it up.
Silverhelix chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
Hell, yeah! That's what I'm talking about.
Kowinj chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
It was short but cute at the same time... I liked it!
TitanLover chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
that was really good! i like it alot, it was really cute! GO ROY/ED! WHOOT WHOOT!
GreedxEd chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
aw, so cute XD
Kikiko chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
well u were right it was short but well written ...i'm also trying to write a one shot but it's taking a lot of time XO!

well anyway I liked how you said a lot with a few words...if that makes anysense !

kiki