Reviews for The Faults of Perfection
andrea.caesar.9 chapter 11 . 8/12
Love the story please update and can you bring creed back I miss him and train together please and thank you
Anon chapter 9 . 5/13/2013
Sure I would be interested
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 8 . 4/27/2011
Awesome, please update soon? I see you haven't updated in over a year, but hopefully you will post again someday soon.

Anyways, I was kind of hoping you'd stay in just Train's POV, but the switching seems to working out well~ It is your story, after all. ;)
x3Phantom3x chapter 8 . 10/26/2010
I hope you update soon ) It's been awhile but I can still hope
DarkFlameDancer chapter 8 . 10/20/2010
love the story
canadiangirl13 chapter 8 . 4/21/2010
Can't wait for more. Update soon please!
Black Cat Angel chapter 8 . 4/13/2010
Train really did change after Eden. He's still in love with Creed. I wonder why Xiao Lee is so different? Don't tell me he's the new leader of the Apostles of the Star! I really like this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!-
Ash4ever chapter 7 . 2/3/2010
its kinda cool seeing everyone's reaction except for Echidna

i hate her so much!.lol
Ash4ever chapter 4 . 2/3/2010
this saddness is killing me T_T
Ash4ever chapter 3 . 2/3/2010
aw poor emo train *hugs*
Ash4ever chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
this brings back old sad memories, but i still liked it

and im totlaly happy your back
Hikaru yoru chapter 8 . 1/27/2010
Hi I love it I read your previus history, it was the best I have read, really. please continue this one too! I cannot wait onegai! XD
Kaitlynne chapter 7 . 11/18/2009
Yay! You're writing again! I already love what I've read, you captured everyone perfectly! Keep up the amazing work, I AM SO EXCITED! :P

Mana chapter 7 . 11/14/2009
YAY! More story!

T.T Ohh... everyone is so sad,can't wait till Train gets back on his feet and kicks ass!

It looks like it's going to be a great story all ready and no i'm not just saying this. About the long intro for each character, it's a good thing. I like the way you pull it out, it's so more emotional and interesting that way.

I can't wait to see this story unfold, if you have time from your new job i hope you continue at this pace.

Good Luck

Musal chapter 7 . 11/12/2009
I think you making them all "mopey" as you put is a good thing. It gives the story a nice start especially if you're going to build it up. It's just the introduction to the story anyway, I'm sure you'll pick it up, nothing wrong with everyone being emo for a bit. Keep it up, you're doing great.
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