|Reviews for The Faults of Perfection|
| Anon chapter 9 . 5/13/2013
Sure I would be interested
| xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 8 . 4/27/2011
Awesome, please update soon? I see you haven't updated in over a year, but hopefully you will post again someday soon.
Anyways, I was kind of hoping you'd stay in just Train's POV, but the switching seems to working out well It is your story, after all. ;)
| x3Phantom3x chapter 8 . 10/26/2010
I hope you update soon ) It's been awhile but I can still hope
| DarkFlameDancer chapter 8 . 10/20/2010
love the story
| canadiangirl13 chapter 8 . 4/21/2010
Can't wait for more. Update soon please!
| Black Cat Angel chapter 8 . 4/13/2010
Train really did change after Eden. He's still in love with Creed. I wonder why Xiao Lee is so different? Don't tell me he's the new leader of the Apostles of the Star! I really like this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!-
| Ash4ever chapter 7 . 2/3/2010
its kinda cool seeing everyone's reaction except for Echidna
i hate her so much!.lol
| Ash4ever chapter 4 . 2/3/2010
this saddness is killing me T_T
| Ash4ever chapter 3 . 2/3/2010
aw poor emo train *hugs*
| Ash4ever chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
this brings back old sad memories, but i still liked it
and im totlaly happy your back
| Hikaru yoru chapter 8 . 1/27/2010
Hi I love it I read your previus history, it was the best I have read, really. please continue this one too! I cannot wait onegai! XD
| Kaitlynne chapter 7 . 11/18/2009
Yay! You're writing again! I already love what I've read, you captured everyone perfectly! Keep up the amazing work, I AM SO EXCITED! :P
| Mana chapter 7 . 11/14/2009
YAY! More story!
T.T Ohh... everyone is so sad,can't wait till Train gets back on his feet and kicks ass!
It looks like it's going to be a great story all ready and no i'm not just saying this. About the long intro for each character, it's a good thing. I like the way you pull it out, it's so more emotional and interesting that way.
I can't wait to see this story unfold, if you have time from your new job i hope you continue at this pace.
| Musal chapter 7 . 11/12/2009
I think you making them all "mopey" as you put is a good thing. It gives the story a nice start especially if you're going to build it up. It's just the introduction to the story anyway, I'm sure you'll pick it up, nothing wrong with everyone being emo for a bit. Keep it up, you're doing great.
| Musal chapter 6 . 11/11/2009
Wow, I can't believe everything Train is getting into since Creed left. If Creed does happen to be alive, he's gonna come back and kick Train's ass. When you said Train had gotten into sex and drugs, I honestly asked "...with men or women?" Lol, that's pretty messed up that that was where my mind went first before something like "oh man, poor Train."
Anyway, good updates, glad to see you're still going with this. Keep up the good work.