Reviews for Inheritance |
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akaizanami chapter 23 . 8/5/2021 I loved it. thank you for this. though I really wanted her to end up with Sauron. |
Devistator chapter 23 . 12/27/2019 I feel so bad for Will, so utterly devastated that such a character you created could just end up being obliterated in the end. Its so obvious who he was and yet he never really got a conclusion. For all we know he could be back in Saurons hands being tortured for his audacity. Or he's been taken over by Sauron who now occupies his body to terrorize Middle Earth is whole other new ways. Poor poo Will, he loses his life twise and his love. |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/29/2019 Are Walter and Lorna Morrison suppose to be the fictional versions of Ed and Lorraine Warren? |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/13/2019 Ok first of all I really like the story. I think it’s such an interesting take on getting sent to Middle Earth but this time they’re actually captured by Sauron. But I think it’s incredibly ridiculous that this person who killed the love of her life and tortured her for weeks and now posesses her best friends body and she’s not doing anything about it? Sarah was perfectly willing to jump off a cliff into lava not 5 minutes ago to kill herself and Sauron and now she’s like “well shit hes forcing me to marry him this makes me mad”. It’s called swerving into traffic. or at the very least threaten to kill the both of them idk I’m so mad? Ok I understand that actually killing herself again is a crappy plot but she should at least threaten to kill the two of them to make him back off in the car. Sarah has no backbone anymore? She’s not actually retaliating as someone in her position should be and it honestly makes me so mad I am sorry but I am literally heated I am going to finish this because I thoroughly enjoyed the first part of the series but Sarah needs to get her act together smh |
ColorfulBreeze chapter 23 . 7/8/2018 Omg, omg omg! You, woman, are amazing! I can't even begin to explain what you'have done to my emotions with this story. |
Imnotloggedin chapter 23 . 5/20/2018 I read this story and its prequel in a day! It was so good I just could put it down. You are a very talented writer. These stories were long enough to be engaging but not so long that I skimmed through the bits I didn't care about. Every paragraph had its purpose and the descriptions that you presented were amazing! Thank you for writing this. |
Guest chapter 23 . 3/27/2018 Hey! it had a good ending! yay! That last ending gave me nightmares, holy shit. |
May the Tomato be with you chapter 23 . 12/28/2017 I loved it |
tkhiroshi chapter 23 . 9/8/2017 Noooooooo there's no Gorendil and Sarah... sobs. |
ThePastaDragon chapter 23 . 7/8/2016 Wow.. What an ending.. XD okay, so I'll admit it. When I first started reading your first story I wasn't sure about it. Of course, I also started and finished it and the sequel (this) within the span of one day sooo I hope that tells you something. I am both satisfied that this came to a conclusion, and simultaneously unsatisfied for some reason. The story is very well written. I'm definitely interested in reading more of your writing, (especially this Snape fic I keep reading about. XD) |
fictionalfinesse chapter 23 . 4/15/2016 So, here's my take on how things happened… Gordon goes back with the spirit of sauron. They go back further in time then or main character did the first time she went to middle earth … like way, way further back in time. Ages of men further. And Gordon becomes Gorindil. Maybe memories are forgotten. Maybe the whole reason Sauron survived after his first defeat was because his disembodied spirit is returned too far in the past. Gorindil says in the first story he can't remember things from before he was a wraith... it creates this perpetual time loop. Never ending. Always repeating. Just a thought. Other thought, I hated the ending. Despite feeling that there is really no other way you could have justifiably had a different ending, I'm sad and depressed that she lost her true love for Mike... but I understand why you did it. Doesn't mean I have to be happy about it. |
gUest chapter 23 . 2/29/2016 well I never thought I'd cry over the Lord of the Ring Wraithes but here I am. nice job with the story, hope you keep writing even if it isn't for these characters. |
michele magnolia chapter 23 . 8/17/2015 This was perfect. Thank you. |
Nesiy Lemon chapter 23 . 7/30/2015 So... I'm not sure I went out of my usual fandoms to read a fic about Sauron, but whatever! This was cool! |
Cionnfhaoladh chapter 23 . 4/2/2015 All i have to are WHAT THE ACTUAL FOOOCK? TOOOCK YOU FOR MESSING WITH MY EMOTIONS AND NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO |