Reviews for Caught in the Rain
Parnita chapter 2 . 5/17/2015
Yup... Definitely need rukia bashing! But i always imagined rukia to be a bl fan...
Awww man... She totally ruined their moment...!
P.S feels for karin & yuzu... The trauma.. Poor girls
Parnita chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
Merlins beard that was hotttt! But rukia to interrupt... No wonder ppl indulge in rukia bashing...
P.s red bikini underwear! Red bikini! Byakuya! Woaah...
Sam chapter 2 . 8/25/2008
ha ha Byakuya is soo the ruler of following rules!lol!
xXNo-life-kingXx chapter 2 . 8/27/2007
i would be one of them to read ur crap and i honestly love it 10 out of 10 yaoi hearts lol and also ur going on my alert list more bakichi
The Daxinator chapter 2 . 7/28/2007
Ichigo/Byakuya-in that order no less!-smut! Yes!
Elyon Tama chapter 2 . 3/22/2007
Ho shiznit that was awesome!
K-Gforever chapter 2 . 3/14/2007
That's hot and halairous all in one! XD
Kouga's Archi chapter 2 . 2/28/2007
It was good!
hoshi chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
lovely pairing...I love that Rukia is the one who caught them together, it made a great ending. I wonder what could be going through her mind at that moment. Ichigo and Byakuya are probably so preoccupied, they wouldn't notice her at all.
strangledcod chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
I loved the ending, it was a nice ending to an amazing story. ichigoXbyakuya looks good together. Why isn't it more popular?
argona chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
I love the idea of ichigoxbyakuya but there isn't so much of is that?(crying)they're e very cool pairing!

any way your story was realy funny and sexy espacialy the first parts but I wish rukia wouldn't get between them and they would remain lovey 't u write more of this pair?I love for more chapters.
tears oF U chapter 2 . 9/22/2006
great story, it was humurous and sexy!
KinNoHitsuji chapter 2 . 9/6/2006
A month later it may be...

Have you done story w/ the threesome in it?

I'd really like to read it if you have!
Sakanoue chapter 2 . 8/2/2006
'Ayame' - Touda is right, however I think I can let it go, as this is a great story (love the 3rd chapter as well.) But you have to keep going with the 'non-adult' one, as it were. Please, please, please, please - I like the idea of Byakuya getting shouted at by Rukia, and then getting drunk, v v v amusant.
Touda chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
I read this on as well, though it was called 'Little Red Bikini' and it was published by an author named Onyomi Tsuki. I'm hoping that's you, because otherwise... _ Yeah. It was funny then and it needs a second chapter or at least a sequel of some sort to truly be anything worthwhile. Took a long time to be posted here though, considering that the one on AFF was posted on the 25th of May. -laughs-
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