Reviews for Mimi in a Mess
Ifab1ndiya chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
Whoa...ick...that was a questionable content story...

I like how you personified Keisuke, Satoe, and Palmon...it was funny

Did she spray perfume on him...I don't get it...
Alforce Zero chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
Oh, ick! :D

Although with 'Humor' selected as one of this story's category, I still couldn't figure out what actually is happening at Mimi's party until I reach the very last line. And in response, I involuntarily have said out exactly the same thing I've typed on the first line of this review.

Nice job.
CaramelAriana chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
Funny and an unexpected ending. Good job!
Shadow of Miracles chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
I'm a little confused by the story but I have to theories. 1) Mimi and Palmon just had sex with a Numemon or 2) they were just simply giving him some perfume. Oh well either I thought it was kinda funny. Also maybe you could make a sequel to this so people can understand more.

Shadow out...