Reviews for Not Yet
yay chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Wow... that's really dark. Still nice though.
Diddle10 chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
She doesn't love him? that's so sad!
voldyismyfather chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
soo sad i love ti x
Akyesein chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
Wow. I could never make such a sad story that good. I mean, I'm good at dark, gloomy moments, but not like that! Great job! So, who was the boy? There weren't really any hints as to who he was.
1mag1ne chapter 1 . 10/23/2006

that was really beautiful...thank you
Czar chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
not yet...

not yet..
out of the ashes chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
oh great, now i'm all weepy...but was bloody brilliant! that was a wounderful start...please say you might expand on this at least?
Un Petit Diable chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
Aw, that was a sweet and sad little fic. I so get how quotes from movies, books, shows etc. can inspire a fic.

OldStallion chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Awesome job, Lone. Who was the Head Boy, though? Blaise? Hm?

And make your half of the profile smaller! It takes up too much space, lol. :D

Demented Insane Spirit chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
...That is one depressing fic. (pause) *_* I have the urge to go write an angst fic. Excuse me. (leaves)

Sirius: -_-...

(comes back) Er, it didn't work out. Ended up making a happy ending. Ahem. Anyway, I really liked this story, even if it was short. I think it was three-star material, really.
JusttxJaycie chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
I'm gonna cry! That was beautiful! It is definitely five-star material. If I were judging the writing olympics, I'd give you the gold medal! I loved it!
Demolition Debbie chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
*five*sniff*fucking*sob*stars*sniff* Wha!
Hippieplumygirl chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
i love it so much
SwayPippin chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
I have to say I loved this one. Though I'm not sure who the boy was, I definately know who the girl was. But I like to think the boy was Draco, simply because I love him :) Lol. Anyway Well done. And I read in your bio that you like Oliver Hermione Fics, and if you're interested, I do have one. It's called 'A Lifetime for Four Months' and it's sad. So if you want, check it out and let me know what you think :) I haven't gotten much feedback on my one shots, so, I'd love to know what you think about that one!

allissariddle chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Lovely! x
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