Reviews for Auction
4thkage chapter 11 . 10/4/2016 that it!
is there any sequel...
its not suppose to end this quickly...arghhhh...
how bout the wedding...proposal...babiesss...happily ever after...huhu...
KayseeRP chapter 11 . 6/8/2013
lol kakashi. so funny.
loved the story by the way. it was very good. c:
Seraphina Dragon chapter 11 . 12/24/2012
lol poor Hinata seeing that
susie chapter 11 . 12/24/2011
awww cute and best story very detailed keep wirting ...nice job
IloveFanfictionHetalia chapter 11 . 10/9/2011
I love this so much~ MAKE MORE~
mysterybeauty chapter 9 . 6/29/2011
wow! glad the girls in this fic aren't that weak!
mysterybeauty chapter 8 . 6/29/2011
i really like this fic. 1 because its not cliche and 2 it has a really good vibe to it. Hope you can do a sequal if needed
Kaito Hatake Uchiha chapter 11 . 1/15/2011
very good

Kaito hungry want to eat
internalpanthara chapter 11 . 12/13/2010
Excellent. You did very well with the overall story flow.

Concrit: Some of the dialouge was a bit confusing in that it was somewhat unclear who was saying what. I feel this was mostly because you put the respondant's reactions right after the dialouge. You could remedy this by moving it to another paragraph.
Diehard243 chapter 11 . 9/17/2010
Pfft...HA *coveres mouth* 'That was hilarious thank you for writing it.
Diehard243 chapter 5 . 9/3/2010
The love making scenes could be made more descriptive. I keep adding my own words to it in order to well make it better but great attempt non-the-less.
Diehard243 chapter 3 . 9/3/2010
If Kabuto was turned into a girl XD
i-am-the-wallace chapter 11 . 8/3/2010
awww that was really good :D
doodlefucker chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
WHY ARE PEOPLE FLAMING THIS ITS AWESOME! dont care wat u people think, i think its A-M-A-Z-I-N-G keep on writing
doodlefucker chapter 11 . 3/13/2010
that was gr8 i really enjoyed reading it
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