|Reviews for Vacation|
| Audra Kaiba chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Oh boy, Kadaj really is hopeless isn't he? lol I really like this story you have enough humor in it to be good and your writing skill really makes it work. Hope to see the next chapter soon!
| MissQuestionMark chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
I loved this! _
“Mommy, I missed you. Mommy? Mommy, hug me back. Why don’t you talk to me! Why won’t you touch me? Hug me, mommy.” Kadaj screamed at the tank.
*falls on the floor laughing* HAHAHAHAHA!
| persephonevii chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Hey, this is pretty funny considering those 4's attachment to their mother. You'd almost expect them in canon to drag their tanked mother to Hawaii. I mean, Sephiroth loped off her head just so he could cuddle it basically!
But I was wondering if you could make it longer and also where Kadah and Yazoo suggests to take their mom (in the tank) on a holiday and Sephiroth is not too happy about the suggestion...and then suddenly we skip to them dragging the tank back from Shinra. That transition was confusing, you could perhaps put a bigger space or an asterisk to mark a passage of time between Kadaj's suggestions to bringing Jenova home.
Also it would be also pretty cool if you wrote a chapter of what Jenova and her family did in Hawaii.
I like this quote the bestest:
"They went back to watching Oprah talk about her feelings and give cars to rich people. "
| black-roselee chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
very random!I rather like this lol made me laugh, wish it was bit longer!
| HeyModsDeleteMe chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
Kadaj was stuck to the tank. “Mommy, I missed you. Mommy? Mommy, hug me back. Why don’t you talk to me! Why won’t you touch me? Hug me, mommy.” Kadaj screamed at the tank. Sephiroth looked up at the sky as if to say, ‘why me?’
Sephiroth finally got tired of this woman and stabbed her. So they were now on there way to Hawaii.
OMG LMAO XD. Those were my two fav parts! Please update XD
| jazzybutclassy28 chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
I like the humor, this is good so far. Keep it up! Update soon!
| Kcc1 chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
| BondofFlame09Fullmetal INC chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
O.o How in the HELL did Jenova aquire kids LIKE THEM! Dear Lord...poor poor flight attendant lady...and family waiting to go to Hawaii!
YOu know...I love the heck outta this story! I did kinda wonder what they did for their mom on moms' day! Man...LMAO I hope there is more?