Reviews for What they don't see
clare.mcneilly chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
I fucking liked it pleas do the next part pleas
HolocronIacon421B chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
Lemon it up a bit
Tilly chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
This is such a beautiful piece. I wish the series went more in depth with Optimus and Elita's relationship, but you hit a bullseye with this fic. Please continue writing!
Prizm chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Yes, this was a great fic, I loved that last line.
Lil' Monroe chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
Who can flame at this? It has good grammer and spelling. Good job on making a Optimus and Elita story.
Storm Blue Lightning Saix chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
aw, poor Elita that was good please write more!