AHHHH WHY DOES THIS HAVE TO BE SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!? ITS 12:30 IN THE MORING AND I CANT STOP READING WHYYYYYYYYYY CLIFFHANGERS!

Ghost laidy and freak show

Nice stories, but I spotted a few flaws.

It is a bit rushed. I lost myself a few times and you didn't exactly note every time the scene changes. A bit more description, thank you very much; when I read the stories the background is BLANK and if I don't know the characters they will be too! (Please do not get offended... I'm serious please don't)

The characters don't really have any depth. The actions aren't well described and there is too much talking; not enough actions. And no offense, but there is this cool invention created called a FULL STOP. Use it in sentences, please?

Meh, I guessed that's all... but I'm only commenting on the first chapter, so you'll probably improve! _...

YOU BETTER BE BUNNY!

I just gotta ask why is this story DISCONTINUED? you had it going pretty well!

somewhere Vlad spits out his tea at that statement!
Oh Jack, HAHAHAHAHA!

Shame you left this story without a endding,but i am just glad it didn't end with something dramactic.

xD LIKE This!

Haha, Moare

Whoa :O I'm really Glad, That Youre Having A 'Lil 'Party'

Lol, Btw I Guess That Danny Lykes It? (Good Luck To Phantom, He Ain't Gonna Survive)

Uhh, MOARE!

Gr8 Story :D

It's Really Soo Ah-Mazing!

The story idea's very good and it's an interesting idea and pairing. I would recomend getting a beta though as there's quite a lot of grammer and spelling mistakes. It's also a bit long winded with somethings that the fic might have been better without. Good story idea but i would recomend getting a beta to edit it and also keeping ANs to the end or start.

Hahah...discontinued eh? Well, nice plot, very long winded and full of whiny fangirlish ideas. Especially the chatroom. You have no idea how much I craved to just grab the whole thing and edit it. You consistently placed the upper case incorrectly. Even though you don't have a beta...you should have word check right? Or not... Man, I wanted to see the end of this. Amongst all the long-windedness, oocness, plot-holes and random fillers as well as your fangirlish fetishes...the development was actualyl coming along quite well. But you should've cut off all that random OOC A/N convos. Quite inappropriate. The lime was very interesting though. But the random bracketted A/Ns really spoiled the mood. Plus expressions such as XD or o.O are really, weird unless you're aiming for a really random crack fic. SOrry I've waited so long to review this, I had to read the whole thing first. I do get annoyed with your OCs, they're just weird.

I totally don't understand Danny Phantom, but my my aren't you a naughty little girl? XD

And yes, fine, I was expecting lemon, XD.

I read through most of the chapters, I don't get any of the stuff, who the heck is Tucker? lol But anyways, that last chapter, lol. ;P Naughty, naughty.

And yeah, it's like...three. XD Anyways...

hi... umm... i'm 2 lazy 2 sign in, so I figured, hey... why not write another review?

XD

well, I don't mind that you're not updating, but WE MISS YOU!

Kyuu: ... we?

Jennie: YES! WE!

-doesn't know where else to reply-

hmm..Try sending an email to fanfiction about this, they should know what to do. D

Holy #$# I LOVE THIS STORY. WW ~

Idk what else to say...cept your story ROCKS.

YAY! AN UPDATE! (srry bout the late review, mi comp was broken)

i STILL adore this story!

DANNI! YAY! *cheers*

What did they see? What I think they saw? OMG!