Magnificent story!

What a rollercoaster!

And I saw Maid Marian in there.

I am crying. This is beautiful.

AAAHHHHHHH! It's only halfway through the story! You can't do this to me!

Magnificent!

so i don't know if you're still active here, but this story and a few others of yours have been legends of my childhood for almost as long as i can remember, read to me as bedtime stories by my older siblings when i was a kid. i'm 19 now and my three siblings and i are all together for the first time in a while and watched lion witch and the wardrobe and prince caspian back to back and sobbed our hearts out for a good few hours before staying up to what is now 5:00 AM reading this out loud together, trading off characters and paragraphs

i think these stories will always hold a place in our hearts and i figured i should say something, because if i created something that's meant so much to a family for almost 15 years now i know i'd want to know

Such a lovely story! I have reread this now, years after the first time and i find it so inspiring and amazing. So many people want to give Peter gigantic faults as if he must have them, when he is perfectly illustrated here-not perfect but always, always trying his best and feeling every failure so keenly. Thank you!

I am in tears. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful and emotion filled story with us.

I'm really enjoying this story, though it's sorta of annoying me that he didn't just ride a Gryphon but that would make a boring story so whatever, good story regardless.

Wow! This. Was. AMAZING! I LOVED it! It was so beautiful, and the adventures were so well thought up and written! It made me cry at some points, it was so beautiful. I love how you write Aslan. Keep it up!

ohhhh...! absolutely wonderful, just as all of your stories are! and if you want ideas for narnian dances, spend a lot of money and go see shen yun. or just watch the ads on youtube. and on a side note, i looked at your profile and was absolutely ecstatic to see the fact that you are one in a thousand of authors who will always finish a story. even sentimental star has unfinished stories (sadly. she's a wonderful author). and i loved the way that this story begins and ends on the same note 'in the company of horses' and not chapters, no, its prologue and epilogue. beautiful, beautiful work.

Aww. I love tender little moments mixed into a story like this, especially when Edmund makes some sarcastic comment. and Iv'e always liked the idea of Edmund being wonderful at singing and dancing but not liking to do it. i think that you are on my top 5 authors list... by the way, try reading Tonzura123 s fics. two words to describe them.

AWESOME.

INTENSITY.

None the less, I still think that you are an awesome writer. One that a hope to some day measure up to somewhat. (If i ever get the guts to tell my mom straight out that i want to start a fanfiction account and she lets me). And anyway, this story was beautiful. really. *smiles widely and somewhat wistfully*

oh! i absolutely LOVED this, more than words can say, so i won't even try! maybe that 'the best of piano' video i'm listening to has some thing to do with it, but, oh, there's only so much that can do! i love your stories so much elecktrum, and this chapter was wonderfully beautiful and so in character too. and to add to that this story is only a little less than a year younger than i am, (i was born in 2005 after sep 30). i really couldn't decide if i was asked which was my favorite of all your stories. they're all too fabulous. nice.

and i suppose that you went back and reread this and decided to make the story 'black dwarfs, blue river' two years later? whee, i love your stories!

and btw, if you ever wrote down what i just said above, i PROMISE that i have never read it!

This was such a wonderful find! I’ve loved the Narnia stories since I was a child but never read any fan fiction before. Truly a joyful and refreshing read! I could hardly put it down until the end. Thank you