Reviews for Into the West
TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 43 . 12/2/2020
What a rollercoaster!

And I saw Maid Marian in there.
TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 39 . 12/2/2020
I am crying. This is beautiful.
TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 22 . 12/2/2020
AAAHHHHHHH! It's only halfway through the story! You can't do this to me!
cheetahlee chapter 12 . 9/22/2020
Henry Vyne chapter 7 . 5/3/2020
so i don't know if you're still active here, but this story and a few others of yours have been legends of my childhood for almost as long as i can remember, read to me as bedtime stories by my older siblings when i was a kid. i'm 19 now and my three siblings and i are all together for the first time in a while and watched lion witch and the wardrobe and prince caspian back to back and sobbed our hearts out for a good few hours before staying up to what is now 5:00 AM reading this out loud together, trading off characters and paragraphs

i think these stories will always hold a place in our hearts and i figured i should say something, because if i created something that's meant so much to a family for almost 15 years now i know i'd want to know
Ash9 chapter 43 . 2/18/2020
Such a lovely story! I have reread this now, years after the first time and i find it so inspiring and amazing. So many people want to give Peter gigantic faults as if he must have them, when he is perfectly illustrated here-not perfect but always, always trying his best and feeling every failure so keenly. Thank you!
RavenLilyRose chapter 43 . 7/10/2019
I am in tears. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful and emotion filled story with us.
Noone102299 chapter 14 . 1/23/2019
I'm really enjoying this story, though it's sorta of annoying me that he didn't just ride a Gryphon but that would make a boring story so whatever, good story regardless.
EleanorGardner chapter 43 . 12/4/2018
Wow! This. Was. AMAZING! I LOVED it! It was so beautiful, and the adventures were so well thought up and written! It made me cry at some points, it was so beautiful. I love how you write Aslan. Keep it up!
anonymousme chapter 43 . 11/30/2018
ohhhh...! absolutely wonderful, just as all of your stories are! and if you want ideas for narnian dances, spend a lot of money and go see shen yun. or just watch the ads on youtube. and on a side note, i looked at your profile and was absolutely ecstatic to see the fact that you are one in a thousand of authors who will always finish a story. even sentimental star has unfinished stories (sadly. she's a wonderful author). and i loved the way that this story begins and ends on the same note 'in the company of horses' and not chapters, no, its prologue and epilogue. beautiful, beautiful work.
anonymousme chapter 41 . 11/30/2018
Aww. I love tender little moments mixed into a story like this, especially when Edmund makes some sarcastic comment. and Iv'e always liked the idea of Edmund being wonderful at singing and dancing but not liking to do it. i think that you are on my top 5 authors list... by the way, try reading Tonzura123 s fics. two words to describe them.



None the less, I still think that you are an awesome writer. One that a hope to some day measure up to somewhat. (If i ever get the guts to tell my mom straight out that i want to start a fanfiction account and she lets me). And anyway, this story was beautiful. really. *smiles widely and somewhat wistfully*
anonymousme chapter 40 . 11/30/2018
oh! i absolutely LOVED this, more than words can say, so i won't even try! maybe that 'the best of piano' video i'm listening to has some thing to do with it, but, oh, there's only so much that can do! i love your stories so much elecktrum, and this chapter was wonderfully beautiful and so in character too. and to add to that this story is only a little less than a year younger than i am, (i was born in 2005 after sep 30). i really couldn't decide if i was asked which was my favorite of all your stories. they're all too fabulous. nice.
anonymousme chapter 11 . 11/29/2018
and i suppose that you went back and reread this and decided to make the story 'black dwarfs, blue river' two years later? whee, i love your stories!

and btw, if you ever wrote down what i just said above, i PROMISE that i have never read it!
Guest chapter 43 . 9/10/2018
This was such a wonderful find! I’ve loved the Narnia stories since I was a child but never read any fan fiction before. Truly a joyful and refreshing read! I could hardly put it down until the end. Thank you
Kate Gladstone chapter 16 . 2/11/2018
Elecktrum, I found you the original of the song about the king and his three daughters: search?qkinghaddaughtersonetwothreetruetomylovesongbowdownderrydumdee&goSearch&qsn&formQBRE&sp-1&pqkinghaddaughtersonetwothreetruetomylovesongbowdownderrydumdee&sc0-76&sk&cvid234143D7A0D140A385BFB4D74D72E8FC
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