|Reviews for Teacher In the Sun|
| Angelibriel chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
Ahora mismo estoy viendo el cap 72 de Naruto, la pelea entre orochimaru y Sarutobi (nunca recuerdo si es el tercero o el cuarto hokage) y se me antojo buscar un fic de estos dos, no los encontre en español asi que tuve que intentar en ingles... que mal que no hayas tomado una cancion asi podria haberle puesto musica mientras lo leia.
Sorry, i dont speak english...
So... i love you fiction...
so bad you dont add music at your fic... but i like it...
p.d. sorry, i remember you, i dont speak english.
| Moth Gypsy chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
That was really good :) I liked how here and there there were very subtle ryhmes and some words that almost rymed but didnt quite. Very poetic and true to the characters, well done.
| Essyllus chapter 1 . 11/21/2006
I thought I was reading Avatar until the AN in the end. I was thinking Zhao and his old teacher... it could have worked as well. The chorus would have sounded more surreal.
*admires awesome fanfic lyric skillz*
This makes me want to write the music to it. xD
| Eowyn-sama chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Wonderful! I haven't read/watched Naruto for far to long now, but . . . wow _
| almostinsane chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
Great song! Poor Third Hokage... I wonder what Ocrochimaru could have been if he was good. The only problem I have is when you said goddamn. I'm very religious. On another note, Orochimaru reminds me of the Devil.
| Nikki chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
I must say, this is brilliant. I usually pass the poetry and songs and such that I see written on by, but I adore your other works so I figured I'd read this. I absolutely love it; I can definitely appreciate the creativity it took to write this. The last two paragraphs (stanzas?) gave me chills! _ Excellent job! ~Nikki
| Blonde-Existentialist chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Hum, interesting. And rather different from the norm no. I can't say I'm personally a big fan of filk, but you did a nice job with the genre; keeping it from being goofy or campy or ballady.
| Azamiko chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
| Dreammistress Jade chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Lovely job. :)
| Tiasha chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Very well done for your first attempt! :) It was very smooth in the transitions and overall was just wonderful. :)
| Outsane chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Filk, eh? Interesting. I gotta tell you, I've never been a big fan of song fics or poetry, but I really enjoyed this. At first I thought it was about Sasuke and Kakashi, but then I started to think that that didn't make sense. It's brilliant as a Third/Orochimaru song (er, but not as a pairing, I just used the slash cuz it was easier). Very nice job! _