|Reviews for Airless|
| SumCheeze chapter 1 . 3/4
This was quite an original idea. And it was overall nicely written and sweet too!
| trilliumgt chapter 1 . 2/13
another perfect one
| yel.yel15 chapter 1 . 9/9/2016
That was SO cute! "Who needed air?" Maaan! I totally squealed with joy!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
OMG! Ugh! Why didn't I think of that! I also held my breath reading through their kiss (would that be considered one?) and held it again on the second one Hahaha LOVE it
| Krissel Himura chapter 1 . 10/24/2015
Very cute nejiten fic! :)
| Son Mon Propre chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
| Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Haha that was awesome:)
| Crazycally chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
for once romance was practical
| MelancholyMadness chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
You should know that this isn't the first time I've reas this. To be exact, it's probably the third or fourth, but before I had it copied and pasted on my iPod... But someone stole my iPod, so I can't read it. About two weeks ago, I decided that I wanted to re-read it, so I went onto my favourites list, but couldn't find it... So I read the entire archive that was NejiTen, completed, English, k-t, and contained either the words: air, breath, flower, breathless, and about half of the stuff under fluff. This was located under Team Gai. The fact the I have looked this hard, I hope, is a compliment. :D
| Kari chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
It was a very nice read, characters very canon XD I like it, Nessie, like I like all your work.
Hoever, there's a problem with your distances: 450 meters would in no way take six minutes to run to. Consider that the Olympic event for the hundred meter dash was won in 2008 with 9.56 seconds. Even if we're not taking Olympic-athlete speed into consideration, an average human can run sixty meters in under twenty seconds, without any particular training. Ninjas would run 540 m in one and a half minutes or so. It's not a long distance at all.
other than that, I really did like it. _
| Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
I really love all of your Nejiten stories. The way to get them to kiss in this story was clever. I look forward to reading more of your stories soon.
| Hafous chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
my first Neji X Tenten fic to ever read !
like it X3
| e1nav57 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
ah!perfect! ...it's really awesome how you get ideas like this...I would never have thought of something like that! !and so cute!:
| Mew-Mew-Brittany-Chan chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
not bad at all
| DawnieWrites chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
I loved the ending line!
'Who needed air?' NOT TENTEN!