|Reviews for my factory of|
| disregard chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Ron broke my heart into too many scattered little pieces. Or was that you and your -angstybrilliantamazing- writing?
This was so sad. Harry and the baby and "where do you wanna go, wife? the zoo?". wow. Some pretty intense shit, powerful really with the feelings and impressions it gives away. But Ron just broke my heart and left it bleeding, and Hermione's not even there, is she? And Harry and Ginny are settling down, and everyone's finding comfort in loved ones and thanking God they survived and Ron...has to fake a smile.
But it all only fell into place in such a beautiful way because of the way you wrote it.
| Rameelia chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Your genius can be quite depressing, you know. Should I gush over this particular fic... or all of your fics? This really is the kind of writing that leaves you a bit dazed afterwards, and it takes a while to wrap your head around it, so to speak.
I love the way you bring the characters to life, as miserable an existence as it is for them, make them so... multilayered, that, I feel, it'd take [me] ages to decipher them. Even though we're supposed to know them already from the series and all.
Thanks for sharing your beautiful writing!
(Oh, and... the uber angstiness? I so dig that.)
| Broccoli-xxxx chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
I love the way you write. Ron, being my favourite male character, seems so real in this - I don't think J.K ever went deep enough into his personality. You have. :)
| silent-voices chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
I can't find words to say how deeply I love this. You say it has no point, and maybe it doesn't, but that doesn't mean it doesn't cut deep to places I didn't even know I had. :)
You are without any shadow of a doubt the best author I have ever had the pleasure of reading online.
| crewger chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
I love how you characterize ron. I love how you voice the subtle dynamics in relationships.