|Reviews for One night|
| We Will Become Silhouettes chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
I'm sorry to say this but, It was hard to read everything was too bunched together...it qwas good tho
| 177624601 chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
| Useless-Italy chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Good job! One time I woke up and my right side was hurting so bad, like knives jabbing my side. I thought that my appendix was about to burst. I ran to my dad and step-mom's room, crying. It ended up that I didn't have appendicitis (sp?) but something else (won't tell you here). Can you do something? Try to space out the paragraphs better, like whenever someone new starts to talk, start a new paragraph. It's a lot easier to read.
| angel4u185 chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
That was really good! I LOVE D/S fluff!
| Kohhiai chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
A bit short, but I really like it.
| o-flightless chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
That was really good, I loved it!