Reviews for The Light in the Dark
dizzydani666 chapter 16 . 3/20
very nice
aznasasin77 chapter 11 . 8/3/2007
i think u should make the capters a bit longer...
XxCrazy SnoopxX chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
I like the story awesome job
courtXjester chapter 9 . 3/8/2007
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Zafrand chapter 16 . 8/12/2006
First, Great Story! I loved it! I only have one thing to say. The story was a little rushed. You need a tiny bit more detail to lengthen the story a bit. Does that make sense? Don't be afraid to drag out a story a bit. All the same, it was a great story. I look forward to the sequel.
jgsparks chapter 8 . 8/12/2006
*gasp, big eyes* OH No!
jgsparks chapter 7 . 8/12/2006
So far wonderful i shall read more_
jgsparks chapter 6 . 8/12/2006
uh oh..them watching..that...together...*scared look*
jgsparks chapter 5 . 8/12/2006
he had to admit she was kind of cute.

of course he did_-
jgsparks chapter 4 . 8/12/2006
So short!..oh well..on to read the next chapt_
jgsparks chapter 3 . 8/12/2006
Love it so much...that words cannot describe...read my ff!
jgsparks chapter 2 . 8/12/2006
oh love it! so much...love that song to_
jgsparks chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
I bet he did_- love it so far!
Nightshroud chapter 16 . 8/11/2006
Another great chapetr. If you do make a sequel, I'll be the first to read it!
Nightshroud chapter 15 . 8/11/2006
Oh what a great fight. Unexpected twist there. I'm so hooked! _
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