Reviews for Tour Of Duty Remember me
darkorangecat chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
I know that this was written years ago, but was checking out the page and thought I would read the story. I am glad I did.

I really like the sentiment in this story and thought that how you chose to end it was particularly poetic (Grinner was happy now; he believed he can keep his life without seeing a thing). I liked your repetition of the concept of touch and how important it was to this character as he can no longer see. Also, I thought that when he was leaving the graveyard, the sound of the shouting for all of the lost soldiers was well done.

By the way, it is perfectly okay to write fanfictions that are in the form of scripts.