Reviews for Double Fault
Judy24 chapter 1 . 1/25
I know you've written this story looong time ago but I have actuallly read it for the first time just now so I hope you're still on and are going to read my review.
I really liked it! Peter and Lizzie are one of my favourite movie couples and this is how I pictured them to continue after the film. But I didn't exactly get the end of your story. If I understood it correctly then there's a quite some time happening between the "Carl had given up on Lizzie and was now engaged to Sonya..." and the next line ("Daddy?"). If not then I'm really confused.
Still a lovely story, though. :) Thank you for it.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
I didn't understand how three days later they had two kids but well written
RebeccaTSB chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
I really do love this story, and the one you did before!

( Also, not that it really matters, but Peters dad was called Edward.)

Thanks for writing this!
I Keep Goldfish In My Bra chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
MEEP!

*squees her tiny fangirls heart out*
Obsessionsaremylife chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
It's brilliant i hope you write more one's soon!
liebedero chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Stellan is Paul Bettany's sons name...now gimmiegimmiegimme!

pleez!

I loved, as always
xstarrynight61 chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Excellant!
graceygoose chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
I loved it but write more!

Grace
iracheLLy chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Hmm.

I think its ..

"I would like to just repetitively make children and practice making children in between. Babies are marvelous. Babies are where it's at. That's why you've got to keep having them - so you've always got one that's not at the 'I hate you, Dad' stage. I'm entirely dogmatic about this."

I THINK.
angelfan86 chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
That was cute. Really cute.
li'lmissnitpick chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
the father's name is actually edward.
TheTroubleWithLoveIsYou chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Thanks, Dee :)
realornotreal22 chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
I have no idea what you said...haha but, i liked the story! i hope that you right more!
mbradley92 chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
I loved it. Great story! Write more. I'm a Paul fan too!
dark88poet chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
This story is so cute. I loved it.
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