Reviews for Insolent
Dasher chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
What impertinence! What easily shifts to affection.
Krystal McKenna chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Oh my goodness -gasp- that was hilarious! I LOVED the comments in parentheses.
Phoenix Wingz chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Love their brain vs pride battles
K. East chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
This one always made me laugh XD Thanks for that. It cheered me up considerably.
Supergirrl chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Perfect arguement.

Rishtalak chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
This was great! I loved the inner monologues. A Chicken!Zuko, ahaha. I love it.
FuckMePumps chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Haha, that funny in a roundabout kind of way. Do I sense a Fallout Boy fan? Heehee...

'Is this more than you bargained for yet

Oh, tonight I'm watching you two from the closet

Wishing to be the friction in your jeans...'

Hehe, I like their songs. Good shot!:)
jellyjay chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
That was funny. I liked it, especially all those random notes and how the scores were up. "Brain: 3 Pride: 2" Meh, priceless.
LORD-BIG-DOGGIE chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Hahaha, 2 idiots! whew thanx for fixin' my night o' bad fanfics!
Patsee chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Heh. I like the way you write. Just those random little funny things, such as

"He shudders at that thought.

(On the inside. He never shows emotion on the outside, ever. Well, he tries not to.)"


"Katara’s eyes narrow. He winces.

(On the inside!)"

And I enjoy how you keep going back to that, and the "Brain:2, Pride:3" stuff.

You rock.
Jazz chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Keep on writing! This story is definitely off to a great start!
fearlessgurl283 chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
hehe. that was pretty funny.
jimmyhere chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Nice. I love the chicken imagery. Though he's more like a yapping dog, if you ask me.

Conversations between these two always make me laugh. They're so cute together!
Your Secret Valentine chapter 1 . 8/1/2006