|Reviews for The Monitors|
| DayDreamer9 chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Wow, cool surprise twist ending and the narrations proved to be clever too I love Ecco, totally thought that this was a cool ficlet! _
| CyndarDragon chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Thank you for answering my questions! And don't worry-you didn't insult my intellegence. You actually made me happy since you actually listened unlike other authors. But...they must listen too, right? We are all human! Things happen!
I read this through, and it was great! I like the way how you sound so...if I could do italiceize the words then I would...intellegent. I like the story, and thank you for telling me how to get to the reviews. It taught me a lesson; to read the entire page, even if it's not the story! Thank you!
| Anubus chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
I liked this a lot. You're an excellent writer, and your interpretation of the Vortex and their queen's thoughts fit perfectly within the Ecco Universe.
| Itanu chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
That was an amazing oneshot. It really helped to fill in the gap of what happened after Ecco: Tides of Time.
Grammarwise, as far as I saw, the whole thing was perfect. If there was a mistake, I didn't notice it at all.
Spellingwise, it was flawless as well; or any mistakes you made were too subtle to notice.
I enjoyed the concept of the story. It was cool the way you captured these hypothetical events of what happened to the Vortex in the past. I also liked the analogies you made, such as "like a baby dolphin first noticing its beak for the first time."
All-in-all, this was an outstanding document. I consider it one of the best I've ever read.
Until next time, Sparky Lurkdragon!
Signed with Humility,
Itanu the Author
| Alex Warlorn chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
Good story with the idea of how the Vortex think and act.
The idea of the monitors turned out to be surprisingly good.
But Drones are normally genderless, so I wonder how they COULD have become part of the echo system without their queen.
I'm confused a bit on how the Monitors assimated into Earth thou. Did they mutate into other animals already around or what?
STUPID STILL HASN'T FIXED MY PMs OR E-MAIL ALERTS!
| BlueGlass54 chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
This was a very interesting story. I loved the glimpses into the mind of the Vortex Queen.