Reviews for Among the Ashes
shaylove chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
WHAT DO YOU MEAN THIS SUCKED THIS IS SO GOOD this is why i do not read oneshots because i get attached and this ugh just perfect.
MiyukiShinodaMindFreak chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
The ending was abrupt, I must say but the descriptions of everything was fine. The characters are still how they are and the rest are fine.
Pentesilea chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Hot and dangerous. Love it!
kirasmith chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
it's not too bad it's prety good i have read better and have read worse i would have to say for the amount of time spent it was pretty good
badkidoh chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
i liked it.
Agnostic Mathematician chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
It most certainly did not suck. Quite the opposite, in fact. :D
The Dark Knight's Revenge chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
I liked it, it was really good :)
Raelin Lupin chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
Ooh. (Shivers) Scandalous! I liked it; don't say it sucked. Poor Sunny... she is so COOL though!

Good job (god I've been reading a lot of incest nowadays...[guilty pleasure])

Raelin Lupin
Laine Whitlock chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
It's fine... Wonderful, even!
10 write 20 goto 10 chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
Nice job

It's not super crappy, it's really good!
spedclass chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
rippedravenwings chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
even though you said it was crappy, i still loved it. ;)
LeahBunny chapter 1 . 7/9/2007

I wish I could write like that in ten minutes. Holy jebus.

Joni Da Pony chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
You only wrote that in 10 minutes without editing? Wow, you did a pretty good job. I actually liked it even though I'm against incest. It seems kind of sick to me but you made it to were I don't really mind. Fantastic job.

Harmful Harlot chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
I have to say, I disagree with your author's note.

I love this story. It was written so beautifully. This story definitely deserves to be favorited.
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